Score: 7
"Impressive animation, script could use some polish"
date: January 19, 2006
Impressive work on the animation, it has a great feel to it. However, the dialogue could use some touching up. With the look of the flash as good as it is, it seems a shame that problems like spelling and lacklustre voice acting are dragging it down. If you're making this as a series you should consider having someone edit the scripts before you record them. Apart from that sterling work, keep it up.