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Score: 7

"Mostly good"

by: blyrd

date: April 11, 2006

The weapons and armor, though hardly out of place in a FANTASY world, are somewhat unimaginative; try a little variation from medieval plate and ninja swords (katana are curved; ninja swords are straight and angular, thus the lack of challenge). It'll kick up your graphics and style scores and present an interesting challenge to your drawing ability. Decent job with names. The use of the green ... whatever to destroy the castle was totally ridiculous, which is why you got a score for humor. If the mysterious knight had cut all the defenders down with great speed and skill, it would have been much cooler, though also much harder to draw. Plus, the green makes him invincible, which is the reason Fist of the North Star was so stupid. Put a little more emotion into your voice acting; nobody feels the same way about taking back what's theirs and actually acquiring it. Conflict vs. victory. Overall, it was good, but I hope the next episodes are improvements to the series.

Score: 7

"Nice, but louder voices please."

by: Kilcannon

date: April 10, 2006

Theme was nice but the sound could be better. I could hardly hear the people talking over the music and other sounds...

Score: 8

"not bad"

by: Jimmai

date: April 10, 2006

great idea, and graphics, and most other things. except sound, the sound was awful, AND i really really disliked the oriental names, oriental swords and oriental music when everything else looked medieval.

Score: 10

"This is a seriouslky awesome flash!"

by: BloodSpectre

date: April 10, 2006

Honestly this starts the entire Loklair thing off perfectly in my opinion, you should get a medal or something. The violence actually is believable which is even better! Bludey good job!

Score: 10

"Spellchek you CC dude!"

by: Zoralit

date: April 10, 2006

Pathetic Wrenchest? I think you misspelt that. Anyway i liked the flash alot, jsut you had your voice's volume waaaaaaaaay down and your sfx waaaaaaaaaay up. My only complaint.

Score: 7

"Not bad."

by: jc987

date: April 3, 2006

I really liked the action, the music, and it is nicely drawn.

Score: 6

"Good storyline, however..."

by: Lionious

date: March 10, 2006

Too much of the idea of this episode, not the storyline, was from Vampire Hunter D: Bloodlust. I mean the horses, the bg music, the arrow scene, and the green orb of power were too obvious of adaptions. The intro/outro music I did notice from Dynasty Warriors ending theme, didn't fit at all. I mean there all knights and their isn't a single samurai or oriental feel to it.

As far as the flash goes, I like the feel to the story, but the visiuals were a lil too dark, and the voice acting wasn't the best, but when this is your first chapter that leaves a lot of room to improve. Make sure you change your sound quality output to 44KHz too.

Just make sure that if you use other resources in your flash films, give them credit for inspiring you and so that you never get sued.
Nice work.

Score: 6

"To the glory of Loklain!"

by: InfernoLOF

date: February 25, 2006

Wow, I must say...that was pretty good! A lot of things dragged it down, though. The animation needs work. There are more than two frames in a galloping horse. The art is very good but...hmmm. How do I say this? It's OBVIOUS that you have style, but your style needs refining. It's quite sketchy, and the proportions are off. I'd like to see more! This should prove to be quite good! Keep practicing, dude!

Score: 8

"not bad"

by: avi-laub

date: February 24, 2006

i gotta say the sound needs some work.
Flash is pretty fluid. Nice action and good story line.

Score: 6

"Could barely hear it"

by: Smyle-Fox

date: February 7, 2006

The opening scene reminded me of the first battle on FFT. An ok submission, But the sound was horrible.