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Score: 8

"ok im gonna give good criticism"

by: fr3ksh0w

date: August 16, 2005

i liked it. i dont really know that much about making flashes so i cant really say anything. but i do no (and im sure ur tired of reading this) that ur voiceovers need some work. and all u fuckers who give shitty reviews an say this and that sux and dont give ur opinion on making the flash better "FUCK YOU". i wish i could be there 2 kick ever1 of your asses. (good work adreniline7 looking forward 2 the nxt one)

Score: 6

"not to bad"

by: wskpunk

date: August 16, 2005

could of been a awesome movie, you don't really need to work on your flash skills but how about a better script and sound. Since it is about skating and i skate, why make it mainstream with pop punk and zummiez. Another problem would be when the one guy said he wasn't in his skate clothes but he was wearing volcom, which is or alteast was skate clothing. Only a few small changes could of make a whole hell of a lot better flash. good job though, keep it up

Score: 0

"dude that was lame"

by: mindless-existense

date: August 16, 2005

the the fuck? im not epileptic but your unnecessary flashes where pissing me off. not to mention your horrible vocs. and the songs you had were good. but you cut them shitty. please make sound effects better in the next one. instead of just blowing in the mic. yeah there are ALOT worse flashes out there. but if i ever see you ima punch you in the head. cause right now my head hurts

Score: 6

"umm..ok"

by: ducklover

date: August 16, 2005

That was good but a little bit short!

Score: 6

"....."

by: trifilob

date: August 16, 2005

pretty nice but i think im about to have a seziure

Score: 4

"meh"

by: hairyhampster

date: August 16, 2005

i see greaphix on newgrounds getting better and better, but the humor from newer artists is just going downhill.

the humor in this was bland, and the sound was pretty crappy too. heres a tip: put some paper in front of the mic to stop those boom sounds you get when people say p's or d's.

work on your humor and this could be great; keep it theway it is and its total crap

oh and btw, just because you say frikkin alot does not make you either a skater or a big man.

Score: 8

"Cool"

by: StarBomber109

date: August 16, 2005

U guys get better all the time. This isnt bad. story was kinda bland. also, this was short

Score: 9

"great"

by: VegetaOwnsYou

date: August 16, 2005

cool wrok, i like this style of artwork. the only thing i found to be a slight problem was that the voices were difficult to hear sometimes, not a big problem at all, still a great flash overall.

Score: 8

"i luv this its well good"

by: metalik-fairy

date: August 16, 2005

I think this is very cool. i like the animation style. dang i wish i could animate like that

Score: 2

"Tacky and Unoriginal"

by: HouseTrained

date: August 16, 2005

I can see this being the same old, tacky and unoriginal story of a couple of "skating dudes" trying to make it in a competition. I really cannot stand things which are totally cliche so unless the next couple of installments offer something different to the same old stuff then I'm afraid this series will be a failure.