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Score: 8

"I'm liking this"

by: noz-v

date: August 11, 2005

Yeah, this is good stuff, i like the style of draw you have. good work

Score: 8

"Can't wait for the next"

by: IndecentClown

date: August 11, 2005

Try and make the lip synch up right and try and make the voice acting not sound so rough. Those were my only compliants. Good stuff.

Score: 7

"Fix the screen settings"

by: SaintShun

date: August 11, 2005

Its pretty good but you need to fix the screen size settings couse it ist set as the movie size, fix that plz

-SaintShun

Score: 8

"Excellent."

by: skylinedfire

date: August 11, 2005

That was sweet sweet salvation from the past umpteen miserable entries I've sat through.

Your art was a bit shaky at points, but otherwise the short was immaculate. The animation was sparse, but extremely cinematic. The voice acting was very cool.

It was a slickly presented little package. I was dying to finish... great place for a cliffhanger. haha.

Great. All my 5 are belong to this. :P

Score: 10

"extraordinary"

by: LittleWashu

date: August 11, 2005

this was well made please finish this

Score: 6

"Its ok"

by: C-and-S

date: August 11, 2005

I admire your non-lazyness in the animation, it was good, but I watched the whole movie and I didn't really understand the story. And I had to read what they were saying the whole time I could only hear maybe two characters clearly. Anyway I look forward to your future work

Score: 7

"Well done for a first submission"

by: Outlaw

date: August 11, 2005

This is very good for a first submission. A good plot line, graphics are good and esspecially the voice acting is very well done. The only downside being you uploaded it to the wrong resolution
size, Go to your gold grounds menu now to sort it.

Other than that I think that you have done really well for a first submission and will go far with your work and I hope to see much more from you.

~~Peace Out
OutlawStarStud

Score: 10

"That was insane.."

by: Sharingan-Devil

date: August 11, 2005

This flash was awesome, there were parts where the voices didn't go with the character's mouth but who cares anyway? The character designs looked awesome as well as the intro of the plot. Nice job and I hope to see more of these in the near future.

Score: 1

"10 humor because...."

by: Lucozadedude

date: August 11, 2005

the animation was SO BAD that i had to laugh, when she puts the phone down you see that the arm isn't whole, lol did you even proof view it? always proof view before you submit unless you want people like me to spot a rather obvious mistake

Score: 8

"You killed my bird."

by: OMGmyFACE

date: August 11, 2005

This was really good, damn! Keep it coming, seriously.