Score: 6
"Not bad."
date: August 24, 2008
GOOD: Loving humor against school. I'm glad my school never had a cafeteria. You improved on the graphics just a bit and I got a few chucks on the commentary of the food quality and lunch ladies.
BAD: Some of the graphics weren't exactly made by you and some of the voice acting was a bit fuzzy sounding.
IMPROVE: My best advice for the episode here is at least try to put in more effort in your art. You can't just rely on Google for your details.
OVERALL: I'm glad you made some improvements but you still have a more to improve. I got some precious chuckles from the satire behind this. I'm definitely glad I can make my own lunch.