Score: 7
"very surreal, original, keep practicing"
date: July 5, 2005
no it doesnt send a messege i love but this was a decent flash
especially seeing is this is ur first flash, your a promising upcomming artist
this flash showed not only effort, but passion and i can see you spent some time on this piece
Graphics- The sketchy moving lines, great touch, loved it. It wasnt stick, and you could tell what was a human, what was a bee, a building, etc. Your flash skill will improve over time and youll evolve to even tougher designs, which will run smoothly.
Style- Your style is one that reminded me of salad fingers, with more plot of course. U sent a messege and made us feel pain that your characters felt. It kept you watching since this was so random and unpredictable.
Sound- A little choppy, however, was clear and suited the character.
I didnt penalize you for the other subjects, you didnt seem to be aiming for them
keep up the good work
-An Irishman
Author's Response:
i will, only better. thanks.