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Score: 7

"Wasnt bad."

by: roadkilldan

date: June 3, 2005

i liked your animation it wasnt bad but i found your video long and drawn out. the sound quality was sub-par and your spanish accents were horrible. but you made a good effort. good job.

Score: 10

"****ing Hilarious"

by: Masterok

date: May 31, 2005

I think I find this extremely funny because I'm Mexican.

XD Sorry but the spanish in that movie is very, very bad. That is why I laughed so much.

Score: 2

"MARIACHI MUSIC???"

by: Galathan

date: May 31, 2005

First off: I am Spanish.

Your spanish is quite artificial. Waiters in Spain are not "felices" to serve you. Don't do literal translations or you will have spanish people laughing at you (We love to hear the accents).

And, please, don't dare to put fucking mariachi music is a spanish flash film. Mariachis are MEXICAN. Mexican and Spanish people are just NOT the same, even in the Spanish both speak. So forget it. We spanish dress normal clothes, I don't know why you outsiders think we are a cheap copy of Mexico (and even think that the Bull "corridas" are Mexican... Mission Impossible 2 is an excel·lent movie of how american people can loose his dignity showing ALL the misatkes of documentation thinking that they know us that well... )
I mean, my english is bad and always will be, but at least I don't pretend that I know your culture (by the accent I would say you're american but I'm not sure).

In animation terms: Too slow. Too boring.

Score: 6

"Nicely Done"

by: JoseLuis88

date: May 30, 2005

Hey men not bad at all, you did it great the spanish is not that bad i understand it well, but the sound of the microphone wasn't good at all, but keep working you are great doing flash my friend pls answer me.

José Luis, Lima - Perú

Score: 9

"way cool"

by: YoinK

date: May 30, 2005

so you made a movie about a restaurant... that's awesome. It's in a different language and translated, that's awesome also. Graphics look good. Voice acting could have been clearer than that.

Score: 4

"comments"

by: 2yenpizpez

date: May 30, 2005

Nice work, but I think that there are a few things you need to work on. First off, the lip-syncing. I noticed that if a character, especialy if they were saying something long, would end up still moving his mouth after he finished speaking. Second off, the charcters sounded like they were speaking through a bad microphone, but that's just technical difficulties that can be fixed with better software. Third off, you had the problem where, if you were focusing on one of the characters at the table, then it would end up looking like they (the caracter that you were focusing on) were sitting all alone at the table, but since you probably had to do this within a short amount of time.
I'm not so sure about this being in Spaninsh, because some of the people on NG are not literate in any other language besides teh L33T SP34K. Some are very American in a bad way, which means that they will have everything against it being in Spanish, because according 2 them, "This is America, not Spanishland!". These people are morons, so don't listen 2 them. It's a good flash, an A- in my book.

Score: 10

"good work!"

by: Draxxar

date: May 30, 2005

I wouldn't worry too much about negative comments about the Spahish. Spanish isn't easy or for everyone, I got a D in it myself when I took the class in high school, yet aced other subjects like math and history. Go figure. I liked the simplicity of the animation but more importantly how you put it all together. Alot of flash toons don't have any point to them at all. At least you followed through with a simple plotline, and followed it up with credits. True, not the best flash on newgrounds but for a school project I think it's pretty good, and who knows, a friend of mine who was once terrible at Spanish wound up speaking it fluently many years after his Spanish class, so don't give up because of a few mean comments here. Good work!

Score: 5

"Alright"

by: Staview

date: May 30, 2005

Made me laugh because they put so much enthusium in the voices

Score: 1

"crap"

by: TheRedMenace

date: May 30, 2005

i would suggest retaking that spanish class. animation was alright...

Score: 5

"yay"

by: DanielMazaar

date: May 30, 2005

Some people will never understand that shit is good ... and some people will never read the authors comment ... to sad.
I really like Flash schoolwork ..., but you should buy a better microphone for future projekts ...