Score: 7
"The sound transitions messed it up."
date: March 20, 2005
It was a beautiful story and all, the art was great, the storytell was a little slow, but still good, but there were some serious issues with both the transitions between scenes (musically) that were very jarring and sometimes the music was really loud (though I don't know if that was on purpose). One question: was the dude with the hitler 'stache the guy who lived next door? or were they different people? that was a little unclear, since we didn't see his face when he answered the door. Anyways, great job, if it doesn't make front page it's because of the sound IMHO. Fix the sound and you've got a winner.