Score: 6
"Well Done, but lacking"
date: March 23, 2005
"I was rather impressed by this piece, but it was lacking, very anticlimactic... I mean, the guy at the bar just starts beating up on him and then gets knocked out, I understood the point, but it was really meaningless. The plot was predictable as soon as she started crying the second time you know exactly who's crying. The death at the end was a bit emotional, but still, it doesn't give a resolution. Even though it was meant to have a sad ending, it left me with a feeling of pointlessness, like the story didn't mean anything, and he didn't gain anything from it. The whole point of him being a composer was lost on me as well... It didn't add or detract anything from the story, only added to time... All in all, it was a well made piece, but I don't think it will get you anywhere, it's just... empty..."