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Score: 8

"nice....but the plot kinda sucks"

by: wash

date: April 12, 2005

ok so heres the thing........you can have very good graphics and shit...but at the end of the day its the plot that matters.....now i believe that this story line could work but youd have to work harder on the reason why he decides to investigate......i mean if he were to hear shots, make a surprised face and run off to check it then its ok....but having an expressionless guy with some lettering saying i should check it out......just doesnt cut it

Score: 8

"Good Job"

by: SynnAstyr

date: April 7, 2005

this film was alright it had good suspense and but the ending was odd he just dies and thats it......Ron Burgandy

Well what do you expect to happen when you walk into a house that you know nothing about but the gunshots you hear? No witnesses man.

It was good, bring more and even more please. Loved the eyes, gave me a chuckle heh

Score: 7

"it was ok..."

by: coolmanvan1

date: April 4, 2005

for your first animaion plot needed more it would just be a little hard to belive that a man would just go inide a house where he heard gunshots

Score: 8

"Okay"

by: DeadlierKit

date: April 3, 2005

For your first animation it was okay, just okay though. The style is creative and I like the graphics (except the characters have no eyes). Make it longer and put more effort on the plot. It needs to be more meaningful.

Score: 7

"good for first"

by: MojoJojo16

date: April 3, 2005

That's a great film for your first one. I liked it but you can improve, which I hope you do.

Score: 9

"quite odd"

by: RonBurgandy

date: March 29, 2005

this film was alright it had good suspense and but the ending was odd he just dies and thats it

Score: 7

"Habla mi idioma"

by: Dano-dude74

date: March 26, 2005

Is a good flash really short and really good. Da idea was good 2 i like it

Score: 7

"not bad"

by: Da-Fish

date: March 15, 2005

not bad but it could use some work it needs to have either more violence or more action and why is the main character such a dumb ass?

Score: 1

"WHAT?"

by: FLETCHROCK

date: March 13, 2005

SUM1 RANG ME FOR 2 SECONDS AND I MISSED IT.? NOT WORTH THE WAIT. LAUGHED AT NOT WITH!

Score: 7

"pretty good"

by: tjw5

date: March 12, 2005

it was good but it was too slowly paced