Score: 8
"Gave me a good chuckle or two"
date: January 30, 2005
Not bad in fact I liked it!
I loved your pure cartoon style here, this type of thing is so classic and it's something you sometimes see in a cartoon on TV, I think you are the first type of person to do this kind of thing on NG, and it certainly is original!
It gave me a chuckle too, you often find in cartoons that no matter how fats and where the fish goes the fisherman always holds on, so we saw the character in this flash dodging trees and jumping on rocks ect, sometimes in slow motion. It had a action-packed and almost 'Matrix' feel to it at some moments, If I don't sound too silly there.
The only aspect I think you could improve on is the graphics a little, since the content is good and the sound suits the mood, you could include a little more detail in the background and character - what about lines of speed trailing after the character as he speeds over the water and uses the rocks as ramps? And maybe beads of sweat coming down the character's face as his eyes widen, because he is panicked? Just a few suggestions.
Overall though this was fairly short but I enjoyed it, it gave me a good chuckle and it conveyed a classical cartoon style. Well done :)
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