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That was very good, sorry to say it, but, the graphics werent of the best quality, also the sound was horrible, you need better microphones, speakers, or something! Also this had little story line, hopefully you can try and brush up on nearly everything a few times before you submit the actual thing! You tried hard as it looks, so I voted nicely, I gave you a four out of ten on the overall reviewing votes, and also a two out of five on the portal voting, since im nice and all :) Best of luck on your future flashes! This was was... commendable i suppose.

-jamie

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Score: 9

"lol too bad"

by: death-soul10

date: August 5, 2005

this is funny i evan seen the starwars episode 3 trailer u did a good job with makeing it funny too bad i saw your movies already

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Score: 10

"u live to rule another day, dude!"

by: hunterbecomeshunted

date: July 22, 2005

another great piece. how's part3's coming along? cant wait 2 see it! the animation has GOT to be good if it takes this long! like i said, u live to own another day, bro.

Sincerely,

Hunterbecomeshunted
the master of sins

Author's Response:

Thanks

Its part 2 act's 1 and 2 lol, yea I know it�s confusing, it took me an hour to explain this to masher and by the end we were both confused :)

It�s going ok, the voices have been recorded and I�ve fix it so the sound is a hell of allot better. I�m now doing the animation for the 3rd scene witch is almost done, so that will be 2 done out of about 10 ish (over the 2 acts). There are some nice improvements in the animation now, so it will be allot better in quality. Not sure how long it will take, maybe I will have part 2 done by the end of summer (anything�s possible) :)

Anyway nice hearing from you again, like I said before if you need any help in flash just sends me an email (on site)

Thanks allot for your support Hunterbecomeshunted

cya
Mike

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Score: 10

"great beginning"

by: jesusman121

date: July 20, 2005

3 words for this video and its series....... Greatest Thing Ever!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

thank you, you're too kind :)

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Score: 7

"Seen the real thing this only shows a small sample"

by: SmoothMunky

date: May 23, 2005

Dan showed me the first two episodes of it. I love it. However, this is a review of the trailer. Its a quite nice parody of the trailer to episode 3. Some bits could have been better but it was overall good. Looking forward to seeing the real thing on Newgrounds.

Author's Response:

hehe cheers mate

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Score: 9

"very good"

by: IvanTuroc

date: May 2, 2005

The drawings and the overall graphics are well done. Could use a bit of polish but you're on the right track.
Good style you are developing. If this is your first, you are doing quite well. Keep at it.
The sound was hard to understand in some parts and a bit out of sync at times. Nothing serious, just noticable.
Not to much violence here. Don't think it was meant to be violent anyway. :)
I consider alot of things in 'interactivity' from authors comments to the replay button and this was pretty good interaction for a movie. Nice preloader, {the NG preloader always work good here} and the status bar could be seen. Nice logo for yourself in the opening credits. You'll find that the better the logo looks, the better the score. And you added a replay button as opposed to loops. That good. A quality button and scene selector is all thats missing.
Very good humor. Well done jokes for someone who wanted to spend more time drawing. The scene with Wylie and R2D2 is great.
I can tell you spent alot of time with this and I really like it. I look forward to seeing more from you. :)

Author's Response:

thanks, glad you liked it

yea this was my first cartoon so for the most part i didn't really know what i was doing (hence the odd sound and weird mouths), now that i'm working on the actal movie everything is pretty clear, learned allot while doing this and Transformers megs and unicron

Btw the real thing is coming very soon, its gonna be a 4 part story with each part split into 2 acts, I have currently made act 1 and am now working on act 2, once both acts are done i will submit it to NG (Most likely this month), Scene selection and menu included :)

i'm glad someone noticed my logo, it features the charaters that i am devoloping into an orignal cartoon that i hope to begin working on once i've finished star wars, but thats gonna be a while yet.

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Score: 9

"Yoda and Wile E. Coyote are awesome"

by: dombor

date: March 3, 2005

You may remember my other review that I submitted for your other flash and well, you still amaze me. It's complete rndomness like that that makes me proud. Seeing as how you say it was... I believe you said it was the first flash you made I won't complain much because it is suspected that the first version isn't exactly the best. I wasn't as confused as last time and I sorta agree with the review behind mine... Jar Jar should die. But, when I was younger I actually thaught that Jar Jar was the best star wars character. That being said well done and make even more flashes!

Author's Response:

ah yes I remember :)

yeah its still being scripted, basically what happened, I wanted to animate more then write, so to get it out of my system I made the Transformers one, so I got a bit side tracked lol, but to my amazement it did so well it made the front page, which very was cool

But now I�m goanna keep writing this till its done, and as for jar jar I don't actually know if he will make it into the actual story, but I do have plans for extras to go with the 3 instalments, and jar jar will probably pop up in one of those.

Anyway nice hearing from you again, I�m glad you checked this one out as well, and glad liked it.

Thanks for the review :)

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Score: 8

"sync wasn't great but a good idea."

by: mysticaloctopus

date: February 25, 2005

I too loved the paper plane.
And this is a commandment - Jar-Jar binks will only enter this flash
a) dead
b) being tortured
c) in a blender

Author's Response:

of course lol, I hate jar jar as much as everyone else. it'll ether be a, b c, or all of the above :)

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Score: 8

"I liked it!"

by: Aceye-Mach3

date: February 24, 2005

not the best animation in the world but the concept and the way it was presented was good enough to look past that ;)

Author's Response:

thanks

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