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Score: 5

"NOT FUNNY AT ALL"

by: dylancb

date: May 14, 2005

Why waste time?

Score: 6

"Sound gets annoying."

by: Sun-Cobra

date: December 26, 2004

The audience sound gets very annoying, and frankly it just wasn't funny. The animation was pretty good though, so keep trying!

Score: 9

"NICE"

by: joe-rox5000

date: December 26, 2004

Very nice i think by watching that you are young but your great at it :D people sayin the sound is annoying but i didnt find it too bad overall you will go far :)

Score: 7

"Good enough for me except..."

by: Ziratos

date: December 26, 2004

for the sound... the laughing in this scene is quite annoying, I think next time you should try for it to be more consistent, not always the same bit of laughing noise, and the sound is also not really well streamed :-/ Except that, your flash is kinda good, you have talent, persevere :-) and merry christmas ;)

Score: 8

"Pretty damn good :D"

by: Jragon

date: December 26, 2004

Sure, it may not rock my world, but that was a pretty funny toon, perhaps a little on the short side but it seemed well thought out and hard worked on. you sounded a little bunged up in the sound, must be the cold eh? :P. keep up the good work :D

Score: 7

"ya"

by: chrisstuff

date: December 26, 2004

You sound a lil young to be making flash.. :Þ It was cool and everything but the voices knda freaked me out?

Score: 6

"Laughter track. WHY?"

by: toxicsheep

date: December 26, 2004

That laughter track made me want to smash my monitor in. Good flash though.

Score: 7

"very good"

by: MIKASA

date: December 26, 2004

you should get some voice actors for your flashes... also work on the lip movments of your characters.... make them in-sync with the words.. the animation was smooth and your art style is great just work on it!