Score: 7
"A few things..."
date: July 19, 2007
I got a few things to say:
1.- Do people have always to drink to see this kind of things? Why do they always need some drug?
2.- The fade outs at the moon with the woman aren't quite necesary at all. I know they are all part of the rhythmn but you could try and see the results. Fade outs mean that a lot of time has passed.
3.- Rain it's not vertical you know? Maybe you could leave it vertical because it somehow it fits the "intention" of that scene, but if you put some rain groups falling in very lighty different direcctions, your rain may seem more realistic.
This are just a few suggestions, but at the end It all depends on what do you say.