Score: 7
"Very good, but...."
date: March 8, 2006
It had a couple flaws in it...
(1) No music...The sound effects were good, but it needed something to accompany it...never underestimate the power of music...it will help...
(2) Dialouge...This may sound picky, but apostraphes from time to time will work...also, it sounded a bit repetitive..."What are you" "dammit, how he get so fast...."
other than that, it looks very promising, and I can't wait to see the next one...in fact, I'll do it now...Good job...