Score: 3
"Hmmm, let's see what went wrong here:"
date: October 12, 2006
1. You really need some background music, something fast for suspense purposes.
2. That dialouge was not only terrible, but when you do things like make "you" into "u" and put THAT MANY periods in there, it get's annoying.
3. It was WAY too predictable what happened. We all knew what was going to happen next, and I fell comfortable speaking for everybody in this matter.
I'm not trying to be too critical, but come on man, next time, just try to take some of my advice.