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Score: 8

"woww.."

by: AMAURIS96

date: May 24, 2009

Prettyy goood... thatss sadd why did he have to see his dad die as a kid? mann tht wud suckk )= Niceee one!

Score: 8

"story should have been stretched"

by: boreduser

date: March 28, 2009

the story should have been longer. the plot was perfect and the graphics were average. but it couldve made it better if the emotions of the man electrocuted and the small kid were narrated in the flash. but anyway, i give it an 8. ^_^

Score: 6

"could be better"

by: xXShortEmoKidXx

date: October 24, 2008

this was pretty good. but, it makes no sense. he saw some one die when he was a kid, which is traumatic, but not that much of a big deal, and then kills himself 20 years later. you should have made it so that HE was one of the people executing the man, and he can't bare the fact that he killed another man and kills himself a few years later. that woulda made more sense. but still, this wasnt all that bad

Score: 7

"Please"

by: 0Techy0

date: September 18, 2008

Pretty good, but please put a warning for people with Elipsy that this flashes!!

Score: 6

"Pretty good"

by: Bing-bong323

date: March 22, 2008

I must say, the whole idea of the story is brilliant. But if i didnt read you notes up top i would have never known what was going on. Next time, use you creative skills and take the time to explain more...Good work.

Score: 3

"very raw..."

by: roadkill284

date: December 31, 2007

It's a very heavy emotion; a serious topic to digest. It could've been done better..at least in the sound department. But it was a cool idea.

Score: 10

"Brilliant!"

by: MadeOfCardboard

date: December 3, 2007

This was outstanding, the concept in it is so life-like... the artwork was fantastic however you could have extended it a bit. I'm giving you a 10/10!

Keep up the good work =D

Score: 3

"good thing it was short"

by: takusanoske

date: October 7, 2007

if your gonna make something brilliant you have to take your time and not rush through it.

Score: 6

"Okay"

by: Katilyst

date: September 7, 2007

For the most part, i think it needs to be longer. I know it's hard work. You had a very good story to it & atleast you didn't have shitty voice overs. You need a little practice but All in all, You did a good Job!

Score: 3

"Needs a lot of work."

by: redneckzombie

date: June 24, 2007

I know you already know this but the artwork has a long way to go. The story was fine but it could have been a lot longer and more fleshed out (what was his father executed for maybe?) and the animation needs work too. Could be a good movie with some work. Keep trying.