Score: 8
"Hmm..."
date: February 3, 2008
I like this concept... I can also see a good future if a couple things could be improved.
For one, the frame rate is too slow... Mario's falling could have gone faster, and other falling scenes as well.
During the letter scene, you could have added a continue button, so fast readers wouldn'nt have had to wait. I must admit, I found the wait too long.
Also, more sound effects would've helped... and different ones as well. Luigi saying "Mario" in the same tone didn't help all that much.
All the drawings were impressive, I thought...
I liked the personality you gave each character... I did not expect Ganondorf to be doing that...
Just work on the things I mentioned, and maybe fine tune your drawing a bit, and maybe you'll have yourself a heck of a series! Looking forward to watching the next one.