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Score: 7

"Very good stuff!!!"

by: RipRap

date: June 28, 2004

I like the way you conveyed the sadness of this life in a subtle yet deliberate way. You got your message across fairly well. The message that using drugs of any kind is NOT AN ANSWER may need to be clarifed somewhat. I only say this from reading the prior reviews, where some people dont get it.

You have a future here at NGs.

I look forward to your next piece(s).

BTW, I gave you a five (5).

Score: 5

"Makes me feel lucky!"

by: nitric47

date: June 28, 2004

A very sad and deppressing story line. But for what it was, not bad. Think u would do well making a comedy sketch, try it.

Score: 6

"Ok?"

by: stick0

date: June 28, 2004

It was just alittle to depressing! I was very impressed that you took times to make a decent flash that looked unique. The only suggestion I make is work on some of your dialogue like I found it kinda corny when he said alcohol and weed make him feel worse why would he use that stuff if it makes him sick? Overall not bad

Score: 6

"hehe"

by: Noodlepot

date: June 28, 2004

quite funny but try to make it a little LESS DEPRESSING! like your style n hope you make more less depressive flash cartoons in the future

Score: 10

"Nice technique man!"

by: KyleStyle

date: June 28, 2004

I think im going to add this to my favorites... it really tripped me out and it had great meaning! I feel so good from that funny ass shit make a sequel or something man, your genius

Score: 10

"That was excellent!"

by: Inverter

date: June 28, 2004

Pretty good for a serious flash. I think you should stick to this kind of stuff, its pretty good. Although, the character design was kind of off...

Score: 8

"great"

by: angry-bath

date: June 28, 2004

ha. that was very nicely made. the art was coool in it. nicely drawn. and the music went well with it. and it was sorta funny at parts. i only wished it was longer and had more of a plot. so what does disorder he have?

Score: 9

"amazing!"

by: snayk

date: June 28, 2004

man that was one of my favs. it was great. the only thing i thought didn't need to be there was "the toilet feels safe" ...to me that just sounds dumb. but the rest of it was awesome. i look forward to seeing more submissions from you.

Score: 10

"I loved that!"

by: WorldEmperor

date: June 28, 2004

I think that was really good man, keep up the good work. I see that you are a deep person.

Score: 8

"Nice"

by: KahLuaAmaRula

date: June 28, 2004

This is pretty good for your first flash...It's kinda creepy, or sad, the poor Scribbler guy...Everything flows smoothly, great work.