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Score: 6

"It was nice for my tastes."

by: Kaworu-Ikari

date: December 24, 2005

Alright, I like your submission. For me, the graphics were great (I can't wait for you to get a left-handed mouse, seeing that the graphics pleased me). Now, here are some tips. First, you probably should think about placing dialouge into your submission, and a little plot. Second, maybe you could add some eyes and facial details, to make the character more expressive (you know, like a man crying just before he gets shot or something like that. And last, some background music would liven it up a bit. This is going to my favorites. I look forward to you.

Score: 7

"needs work"

by: Jet-Toaster

date: August 30, 2005

you wanted tips, ill give you tips.

* when the bullet hits the guys head, make the bullet dissapear untill it comes out the other side

* make the characters move when theyre flying through the air

*when the guy standing against the wall gets hit, he should at least flinch

good luck w\ your next one :)

Score: 2

"dumb"

by: JT

date: August 11, 2005

it wasn't very entertaining

Score: 6

"havent i seen this in a movie somewhere?"

by: The-Jerm

date: May 7, 2004

i feel like im watching a flash back of the matriz dosent realy have a plot but i was bored :D

Score: 7

"damn dude"

by: Asswipe3210

date: April 16, 2004

im suprised. you said in the thing the graphics arent that good well...there actually pretty damn good compared to a lot of other shit on the portal that has higher score than this one. i want to see more, like you using ur left hand. ^^ good job

Score: 8

"no complaints, really"

by: phoenix-risen

date: April 16, 2004

For "graphics not so good" those were some damn skippy graphics - a lot better than a bunch of the junk that show up in the portal. Sweet piece, liked the action, and it was uniquely filmed, framed, whatever. Cool. Okay, one complaint: the dude's bullets seemed to disappear in midair when he was falling backwards - weird looking. Nice piece, though.

Score: 8

"yep i liked it :)"

by: DJjumpsteady

date: April 15, 2004

Good job dude. I like your style. I think if you did thid with your right hand and you be hell with a series of these cartoons. and if i were you id make them longer that way i can be lazier and dont have click my mouse button to be futher satisfied by your creativity.:)

Score: 8

"Congrats."

by: filthydeficator

date: April 15, 2004

I think it is a really good job and deserves a higher score than it has! Maybe if you put some big breasts in it, everyone loves boobs! I would definitely recommend some more color and possibly making it longer and adding a plot, not that there's anything wrong with random killing. The only thing I didn't like was when he shot the guy and the head and the bullet seemed to go by his head rather than through it. Oh well, nice job!

Score: 4

"ok"

by: KWAS71KCK

date: April 15, 2004

it was ok, but a bit short and could've used more color.

Score: 9

"awsome"

by: madcowx1

date: April 15, 2004

this movie was great