Score: 6
"Not bad, but not good, either"
date: March 12, 2004
I like your art style, it's fitting for a Harry Potter spoof, which is good, but your animation got a little lazy during some of the action scenes when the griffindor team ganged up on Harry.
Also, I'd recommend you spend some more time in the writing process...There were some parts in the cartoon that were less of a spoof than others...and the transitions dragged out. The jokes were pretty dry, too. For future reference, adding some form of the word "Fuck" to any statement might make it funny coming out of one, normally timid character, but 900 times from everybody and their brother just gets old really fast.
Sound quality wasn't so good either. You seriously need to get a few voice actors who can handle british accents, and a studio so you can really shout your lines out, rather than going for a supressed falcietto voice into the computer mic in your bedroom.
Just put some more wit in the jokes in your next flash, get better sound quality, and make it flow more smoothly...for a spoof, it had a little too much plot in it, and for a less random comedy, not enough plot. This was alright, but lacking in enough areas to make it just average.