Score: 6
"did i miss something?"
date: February 22, 2004
good piece to get people hooked, but like everyone else said it needs some music to make it more interesting and engaging. the action was nice, but the violence was kinda pointless. add some story line elements because i had no idea what was going on. who was the girl? who was the bad guy? who are the guys trying to save the anonymous girl? as is it's a good piece, but it needs a well thought-out storyline to make it a great piece. make part two have the storyline that part one didn't have. keep up the good work, add a story, and it'll all be good.