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Score: 9

"holy fuck,u own!"

by: zark-the-virtunx

date: April 21, 2005

this is the best animation ive seen yet,im gonna go and watch the second one now,u get a 5!

Score: 10

"The door."

by: Darknightmares1000

date: April 21, 2005

She had to use the thing to open the door.

Score: 8

"Good stuff.."

by: EnjoyTheFacts

date: April 21, 2005

Just two things: The characters looked almost spot on with something you would see in Heman. The voice acting wasn't that great at some points, it really stood out with the girl's voice.

Besides that, great work!

Score: 9

"impressive.."

by: yippiekayee

date: April 21, 2005

I had just watched chapter 2, and i was prepared for the first part to hold a lower quality...surprisingly...it didnt! but i would really like for you to make longer episodes, they are abit short.

Score: 10

"Wow"

by: Fesoferbex

date: April 21, 2005

After wading through half-assed attempts at flash making I stumbled across this gem! Wow! Very smooth, very careful, and very well thought out work. Keep 'em coming!

Score: 7

"Wait. What?"

by: Revwaldo

date: April 21, 2005

The water source for the fortress is the Well in Town which takes hours to get too. And when they get water they only get one bucket at a time?

Or are we to assume that the Girl took too much time by going to flirt in town with her boyfriend?

Score: 10

"Very nice."

by: Chibi-Choco-Moo

date: April 21, 2005

Very great series! Look forward to seeing more.

Score: 10

"One little problem"

by: Dark-Qi

date: April 21, 2005

Is that that secret doorway is waay too obvious, if only you could change it so that it's like a secret magic spot where you have to touch in order to make a secret magical door that only a special person (this can go into future episode than makes out that she's like the unknown descendent of that last white sorceress (no racist pun intended) and her friends can enter. Or maybe that only a secret person and her friends can SEE or something. W/e. it's Your flash.

Score: 9

"beutifly done"

by: pit-devil

date: April 20, 2005

you are truly talented

Score: 7

"Interesting"

by: AlwaysAloneSFO

date: April 20, 2005

Good flash, it would be even better if you made it more adult-like, the only thing I can really criticize on it is you need to make the sound quality better.