Score: 9
"loved it"
date: February 14, 2004
this was amazing. It appears to be a very promising series. the art/animation was smooth. the sound was a lil sketchy. good background music, but the voices were a tad sketchy. the plot wasnt amazing, could use some more imagination. but overall its really great. this is constructive criticism, I think it was a great first entry. I look forward to chapter 2. also make sure you get the tuff guy some cool armor later on in the story and perhaps fix that snaggle tooth thing hes got going on. armor=yes snaggletooth=no. oh yeah make sure to add a monk/ninja/samurai/theif type char to the cast. i like those types of chars. give him a secret past and keep him myserious and quiet. it always makes for good plot production. he can have flashbacks, or be pried for a lil background history now and then, make him more appealing. thats all i got, great work keep it up.