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Score: 9

"Good Job"

by: StonedImmortal

date: February 15, 2004

Kinda like Zairik seaid the story line was kinda weak but the graphics were tight...since it is in the medieval times you could have them find some hashish to lighten the story plot up a bit.but it was great!

Score: 8

"Great Work!"

by: newbie122105152

date: February 15, 2004

The only thing i didn't like was that the story was a little boring. Make more characters, and a few fighting scenes, monsters, and more exciting and dramatic story. Your characters were very dull and boring village folk. Give the guy a Mace and make him the comic relief and the Girl a history, and special powers (I think thats what you were going to do when she opened the door with her jewel).

More Character Suggestions:
Have a powerful and serious swordsman with a scar that is searching for a tresure, an elf archer who likes fight alone, and a theif/tresure hunter who's arrogant but somehow joins up with the team, but plans to use them to get the tresure.
NOT ALL IN ONE EPISODE THOUGH.

Your style was great though. The best graphics and animation I've ever seen.

Have you played any Role-Playing Games?

Score: 8

"what the fuck?"

by: The-Objekt

date: February 15, 2004

it's pretty cool but it seems like one of those weird christian cartoons they use on kids no offense though the art is good but i barely got any story........just keep up the good work

Score: 7

"Ehn"

by: coraybay

date: February 15, 2004

EEEhhn. not very good for mid. times period,but i geuss it's a good start. Really good art.

Score: 10

"amazing work keep it up"

by: edern

date: February 15, 2004

still good

Score: 8

"I see a lot of potential"

by: GlitchPhil

date: February 15, 2004

The art is fantastic. Really dynamic character design.

The sound needs improvement, because the levels of the voices are too low, or unblanced otherwise.

It was very good, but I thought the pacing was too slow. The walking through the forest scene could've been cut a little bit.

Keep this up, it's some good stuff. AND it's very refreshing to see something CLEAN come out of newgrounds every once in a while.

Hasta

-Phil!

Score: 9

"Nice ^^"

by: eXp0se

date: February 15, 2004

Very nice. Graphics were great and the music and sounds fit just right.

It was boring ;-)
...but this was the first episode.

Score: 10

"WOW...OMG"

by: ngpizzaboy

date: February 15, 2004

That was the best ever.I can't Wait For 2.

Score: 10

"blew me away"

by: Kareless

date: February 15, 2004

best flash ive seen in my short life, that was pro

Score: 8

"Very Good"

by: Gustov

date: February 15, 2004

You said you were going for quality, and it shows. The chick looks hella hot, but the kid is kinda annoying... maybe you should make him grow up real fast or something by becoming a guard or... hell I dunno.... Can't wait for the next one!