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Score: 7

"Good Potential"

by: Zopheal

date: February 15, 2004

Ok, I'll just break everything down.
Graphics - 8: Well drawn for the most part, but the the flaws lie in the animation itself. The walk of the characters is a bit unnatural. Also, this made you lose on both sound and animation, the voice over is off, by an obvious ammount.

Sound - 9: the only thing that stopped you from a ten here was the voice over being off and the volume of the voices. It needs to be adjusted, I can barely hear the girl, while the other two characters come out very loud.

Style - 7: Obviously it has certain feels to it, the music especially made me think of more recent zelda games, but still well done.

Overall - 7: (I figured the other categories were self explanatory) On top of the comments i've already given, you're overall score was docked to 7 (a four on vote scale) because of the lack of a story at the moment. If you're going to release something in installments you have to at least establish some sort of story to keep people coming back, even if it's not the main one, a story of some sort, side or otherwise, needs to be established.

Score: 6

"It's kind of a shame...."

by: SpaceButler

date: February 15, 2004

I'm giving you a score that's maybe harsher than deserved, but it's such a shame that an animation with such amazing art is bogged down so much by lack of everything else.

The graphics are fantastic, but there's nothing I hate more than a serious or high-quality movie with horrible (truly horrible) voice acting. I understand that this is just a flash movie and your resources were probably limited; but in this case, I would've much rather read subtitles than listen to that awful VA'ing.

As far as the story goes, I know it's just the beginning, but I already find myself terribly uninterested and sick of the two main characters (especially the girl with the shitty voice acting).

Whoever the artist is on this movie should drop the rest of the participants and find some skilled partners. I love the artwork and would love to see that talent applied to what could be an exceptional animation (flash or otherwise).

Score: 6

"Hmmm...."

by: Fragman52

date: February 15, 2004

It didn't do it for me, sorry. The graphics were only KIND OF good, and the story wasn't funny at all or interesting as a matter of fact!

Score: 10

"Amazing"

by: movie-critic

date: February 15, 2004

First off....Inuyasha ur a retard....so what this movie wasnt stupidly funny like RAB or TN or disguistingly gorey like just about every other movie on Newgrounds....it was a very well made movie....sarchasm-on\ thank you so much Inuyasha for not blamming this movie because the series has potential i mean you are obviously the decider or whether this movie stays on NG so thank you so much /sarchasm-off

Score: 10

"Oh lordie!"

by: slaXor

date: February 15, 2004

You should go pro... seriously.

This could make you lots of money.

Score: 8

"Very well made"

by: Fierras

date: February 15, 2004

i liked it, it wasn't like you were trying to be funny for people to laugh at loud but it was entertaining in a high level. I also disagree with the last review. And this shouldn't be blammed in any way

Score: 6

"Well..."

by: Inuyasha-913

date: February 15, 2004

... i understand that was an opening cartoon, and was jst an opener, but cold you please inclde something that adds to enjoyment value. I understand this is an opener, but please. well, the series has alot of potential, so i wont blam it, but you should consider adding humor, or violence to your cartoons, or even just an entertaining plot. I understand that you put hard work into it, bt that really had low, if any, entertainment value

Score: 10

"Woo"

by: Sn1pe

date: February 15, 2004

That was pretty good! It was like a full, real cartoon you see on the T.V. I'm lookng forward to chapter two.

Score: 10

"so good"

by: ZeroNight

date: February 15, 2004

this game is good no to bad

Score: 8

"Very good."

by: jack-the-cd-ripper

date: February 15, 2004

Great animation. Strong opening for the series. My only real complaint is the kinda-low quality microphones and voice equipment. Great Music though! Probably composed on a Korg or a Kurzweil. Very good Compositions.

Also, the beginning was kinda slow-paced but then again, it IS the beginning of a series (so it's ok). Good job.