Score: 10
"Took me a long time. =P"
date: December 1, 2008
Animation/Graphics - Pretty good. What I like better on this submission is that you have animated the crowd a little bit more. It still needs to be a little bit better and some of the demons in the crowd aren't animated at all. I think the people in the crowd need to be drawn better also. A good background would make this flash even better.
Story/Content - You sure didn't make this one easy did you. =P Haha, probably the hardest one yet, but it makes people really pay attention to the flash and try out all of the possibilities. I refuse to cheat and look for answers, but if I ever really get stuck I may have to do that. ;) Again, I promise I won't unless I really get stuck sometime.
Audio - Needs a lot of work yet. The "Okay" was overused and boring. You just used the same Okay the entire time. Also, for the voices.. I understand they are ghosts and everything and that the don't really have too many emotions in their voices, but it still takes away from the flash a little bit because the voices are so dry and boring. The screams need to be worked on. They sound even more quiet than the regular voices.
Overall - Another great episode, but the voices really need to be worked on and the background itself needs a little bit of work.
~ Review Request Club ~
December 23, 2008
Author's Response:
Yeah at times we cut corners so that the file size can be lower, thanks for the review.