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Score: 9

"Really good"

by: vindacator87

date: October 25, 2006

Your art is really good and the charecter has promise to be really great, the story is simple but driving, it could become an epic flash with a few voiceovers and some smoother movement of the characters limbs and you cant go wrong. really good job, I hope to see another one.

Score: 9

"lol i remember this"

by: RedCali

date: August 19, 2006

This submission was made years ago... I remember watching in school while my computer arts teacher wasn't lookin, that must have been like 5 or 6 years ago. Back in the day, this kind of animation was indeed considered kick ass. It's too bad it hasn't become golden with age...

o well ^_^

-Big Red-

Score: 4

"It was.....ok....no comment."

by: Kennywoo

date: July 22, 2006

Just one thing.
Could have used alot more work. I couldnt pay attention to it for that long. Twas really repetative.

Score: 5

"hmmm"

by: metal248

date: July 20, 2006

it would be better if it wasn't a slide show and the characters were actually animated.

Score: 6

"uhhhh o_o"

by: yurie

date: July 8, 2006

well...hmm..its kinda short..and the graphics were kinda augmented o.o =S otherwise it wasn't horrible but ya..i suggest next time u erase the font bubbles thingy cuz it kinda ruins the mood a bit.

Score: 8

"here we go again"

by: Viper8urstang

date: July 6, 2006

With some thinking i can pull everything together in your story. I recommend that u get more of a plot goin in future animations and create some longer flashes and u will get front page everytime. U got a creative imagination, just need to pull it all together and u got something great. Oh and one more thing to get front page....Need to improve the walking alittle...doesn't matter if there legs look like they move like the Nazi army march..just get those suckers movin.

Score: 8

"Not Bad"

by: ZeoXLR

date: June 30, 2006

This is good.
Nice job
But there is room for improvment tought...
Keep up the good work!

Score: 8

"good 1"

by: A-M-R

date: June 22, 2006

i juzz wanna say... yanow... GREAT Sound And movie

Score: 6

"..."

by: Hamy-jamy

date: June 3, 2006

Wow this was more like an epic then just a short. I thought that the highlights of your flash had to be your background music and your character designs the parts that i thought let down your flash were that it wasnt animated to a good standard and that it wasnt put altogether as a trilogy in one big movie.

~X~
(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)

Score: 6

"needs work....."

by: Leviticus-Proj3Ect

date: May 25, 2006

you were headed in the right direction when the woman was being executed for having a sexual relationship with an elf, (so witch told me this was a fantasy kind of thing) but it was wayy too short. but it was okay.