Score: 9
"Ahh, nicely done."
date: April 25, 2008
I liked your idea that you riffed on here. The intro was very dramatic. Although, the text box was a bit too cramped and hard to read. I realize that having that font ups the drama feeling but also made it a bit harder to read which , at some level, detracts from viewer pleasure.
Overall, I think this was maybe an 8.5 rounded up toa 9. It was very good and I enjoyed it thoroughly. I guess I go on to part II now to see more story unfold?
Nice work!!!