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Score: 6

"Need better sounds:"

by: McJesus

date: September 24, 2006

Dude.

You need voices.

You need better sound effects.

And make sure it sounds good.

Great idea.

Score: 7

"Loved it!"

by: Darkness71487

date: September 6, 2006

This movie was tight, no doubt about it. I loved the Terrance and Phillip poster in the boys room. Would have given sound more points, but there were no voices. Keep it up!

Score: 7

"where were their voices?"

by: atomic-tangerine

date: September 3, 2006

great idea and good choice of vocab. but what did u do with the voices?
this flash would have a lot more points if it had actual voices

all in all not half bad

Score: 5

"Yahoo? Not really."

by: Abyss

date: August 18, 2006

The good: I liked the sound effects, especially at the end when the lights went off. The graphics were clear and so were the voices.

The bad: Well, if you want to make a advertisment, its really best not to make it about something violent. And if anyone attemted to make this funny, they failed. Somehow its seems a little unreal. The biggest fault here is, that the whole movie seems pointless.. why would you buy something from Yahoo which would take a week or so to ship if you can go across the street. Whoever wrote this has to think the script through a little more carefully.

Advice: The bit about ordering stuff from Yahoo is fine. The bit about bullying for no aparent reason is fine. They just don't mix together. Try a different storyline with little bit less violence and a little more laughs. Make him order something else, other than weapons, because that would set a bad image rather than a good one. Hope you take his the right way, because with a little editing, it could score a perfect ten. ;-)

Score: 2

"This actually Happened its not funny"

by: Loopylouis1

date: August 5, 2006

This actually happened in a school in the US. The outcome was far from funny. to be honest you may as well have done a video on how big a plane has to be before it knocks down the twin towers.

On another note:
The sound Could have been Better that fact that it didn't fade in or out made it sound dodgy. The graphics were probably your best Part in this movie, although still has potential. I beilieve to increase user activity you could have got the viewer clicking the search button etc.

Hope im not too harsh.
Louis.

Score: 4

"coulda been better"

by: Davious

date: June 23, 2006

This had better potential I think, first off there were no decent sound effects, except for a punch, a gunshot, and some crickets, and the only voices you incorporated into were a girl screaming and some brainless twat screaming "You got knocked the F*** out!", you really cheaped out in the department of sound.

The animations and graphics were decent but could use some work, the concept was pretty funny in a distorted way but the way you presented was poorly done. I generally have a good sense of humor but I couldn't help but flinch slightly at the idea of making a joke out of school shootings, but it was still pretty funny...

All things considered this coulda been done better, but clearly not much effort was put into it.

Score: 3

"Needs a lot of work"

by: slayermet420

date: June 19, 2006

This was....interesting. It has potential to be hilarious, but it just didn't get it.

Score: 4

"hardly any sound and not much humor"

by: evildude-57

date: June 6, 2006

hardly any sound and not much humor. could have been much longer

Score: 8

"The dark side of Yahoo!"

by: eccentricmiked

date: May 30, 2006

Hmm, I wonder if that did cause any of the school shootings. I think everyone should Google, help prevent this epidemic. Good parody.

Score: 10

"ha ha ha"

by: newgrounds27

date: May 28, 2006

this is short but funny. You got knock the fuck out man.