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At 11/22/08 06:56 PM, zedd56 wrote:

At 11/22/08 05:54 PM, kris008 wrote: i got bored and did more work on it..btw the main menu will be alot better when the game is compleated all that will be gone and a new one made with good graphics....its just a beta menu so u know whats what :D
and i need help for a name of the game cuz i got no idea what to call it.
beta 0.3
comments so far?

Looking pretty good :D
Crits:

-Still needs to be a lot harder. Right now, it's kinda hard to do suicide :/
-A bit more animated. Turn those still enemies and player fish into mc's that move around and stuff... so like when the shark comes in and swipes across the screen, his tail fin is moving or whatev... just to make it look more interesting
-Water is also very plain, add some bubbles rising every here and there, or some background seaweed or something lol

Although you were probably planning to do all of that anyways :P
Just in case, though...

Thx for the comments

It will become a lot harder when completed i will be adding loads more fish and obsticles and powerups.
At the moment im trying to figure out how to draw a trawler net but i cant figure it out just looks dumb :l so meh!
im also doing some powerups/powerdowns too atm.
as for the water i already had that in mind :) does look really boring atm so ill make the water look better on a later release.
as for animationg every fish..i really dont think ill have time to do that :l but ill try to make everything look more...well more movement through the game...bubbles, seaweed, etc.

btw Randomist did you look at the latest beta? cuz you quoted the first beta i posted..jus wonderin lol

btw Randomist did you look at the latest beta? cuz you quoted the first beta i posted..jus wonderin lol

Yeah i did it was just the first one i pressed on to say something so yeah i did its great and your progression is fast!

Next Update The menu is just about complete people!!!
This is it so far please comment!!!!

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/719 70_menu.php

Comment on what should be changed and updated

for the menu all i need is a cool picture of the main character to put on the side!

Please comments

At 11/23/08 06:01 AM, MrRandomist wrote: Next Update The menu is just about complete people!!!
This is it so far please comment!!!!

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/719 70_menu.php

Comment on what should be changed and updated

for the menu all i need is a cool picture of the main character to put on the side!

Please comments

Thats AWESOME!!! once ive done art for my game ill send you the cool pic of my char, my arts getting much better now by the way

YAY a comment, glad you like it!!

please more comments

At 11/23/08 06:41 AM, MrRandomist wrote: YAY a comment, glad you like it!!

please more comments

Okay ive got a preview of my character, hope you like it

needs a bit of improving here and there but its good wont really need the whole body though!

At 11/23/08 06:58 AM, MrRandomist wrote: needs a bit of improving here and there but its good wont really need the whole body though!

I know, that was just a preview, the cool pic will just be him holding his sword in the air(you only see his arm, hand and the sword)

i hope your going to give him another eye

oh and heres a quick preview of what ive done nothing much but yeah you get the point

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/810 11_pee.php

At 11/23/08 07:30 AM, CrustySheet wrote: oh and heres a quick preview of what ive done nothing much but yeah you get the point

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/810 11_pee.php

Well great art so far, your a good artist!
i dont see a point in your game as yet, but you could explain them if you like!

At 11/23/08 07:27 AM, CrustySheet wrote: i hope your going to give him another eye

The way hes looking i didnt think he needed another eye>.>

no hes not quite facing the right way for one eye

the game electricity will shoot through the wires and you have to dodge it by peeing on different wires
and not get shocked by the time you run out of pee :)

oh ok i get it now it makes a lot more sense =)

At 11/23/08 07:48 AM, CrustySheet wrote: no hes not quite facing the right way for one eye

the game electricity will shoot through the wires and you have to dodge it by peeing on different wires
and not get shocked by the time you run out of pee :)

Okay is this better?
oh and ur game looks good, ill be playing that for a while once youve finished ^.^

DAMN forgot the picture

noyouwillhave to change the whole angle of him or try something like this

At 11/23/08 08:06 AM, bartymany wrote: DAMN forgot the picture

Nice cyclops.
Crustysheet i fucking love your game <3

At 11/23/08 09:56 AM, zedd56 wrote:

At 11/23/08 08:06 AM, bartymany wrote: DAMN forgot the picture

Nice cyclops.
Crustysheet i fucking love your game <3

haha thanks

but im having some trouble with the code im trying to fix
or maybe its just me..

1. does it move as soon as you press the key or does it take 2 goes sometimes?
2. going down is not working properly :P

haha thanks

but im having some trouble with the code im trying to fix
or maybe its just me..

1. does it move as soon as you press the key or does it take 2 goes sometimes?
2. going down is not working properly :P

Sorry about that dude it was still logged into my Brothers username haha

yeah...the angle of ur head is off..that's why it doesnt look right..UNLESS he's fighting with his head turn to the side...so...I unno if he have psychic power that allow him to see with his ears or something..

BUT HEY MAN! it's ur character

At 11/23/08 06:01 AM, MrRandomist wrote: Next Update The menu is just about complete people!!!
This is it so far please comment!!!!

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/719 70_menu.php

Comment on what should be changed and updated

for the menu all i need is a cool picture of the main character to put on the side!

Please comments

Excellent interface. I liked the background in particular, nice use of blur effects.

However, you could add on upon it.

For instance, in the opening menu, you could have snap-shots of games fading in, moving across the screen, then fading out. That would be pretty cool.

As for the menu music, this is a pretty good contender, but you can change it to something else depending on the tone you want to set: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/7 9440

I uploaded my game to the portal, you should vote 5. Although that would probably go against everything you believe in. So don't vote five, if you don't feel like it, I guess. But check it out.

mmk so you want the fish animated..but i dont have time...BUT ive found some reallycool animated fish on google i could use which would be 100 times better.
i was just wondering tho am i allowed to use images of google or has everythin gotta be done by me?

At 11/23/08 06:01 AM, MrRandomist wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/719 70_menu.php

Make sure to embed the numbers for the number of games completed in the dynamic text box. I don't have the font that you're using, so it looks funny to me.

At 11/23/08 02:24 PM, kris008 wrote: mmk so you want the fish animated..but i dont have time...BUT ive found some reallycool animated fish on google i could use which would be 100 times better.
i was just wondering tho am i allowed to use images of google or has everythin gotta be done by me?

slap it with a google tag and im pretty sure u'll be fine

At 11/23/08 01:00 PM, Discoruler wrote: I uploaded my game to the portal, you should vote 5. Although that would probably go against everything you believe in. So don't vote five, if you don't feel like it, I guess. But check it out.

lol, it's dead.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/816 92_Trig_02.php

There's mine, not sure what to do with it next, may give someone a time limit and base their score off of accuracy. but pretty simple.

W,A,S,D keys to move. Mouse to shoot.

At 11/23/08 10:46 PM, DawnOfDusk wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/3408/816 92_Trig_02.php

There's mine, not sure what to do with it next, may give someone a time limit and base their score off of accuracy. but pretty simple.

W,A,S,D keys to move. Mouse to shoot.

Pretty cool. Maybe add some moving enemies? Also, put some boundaries on that beezy. You can fly off the side of the screen and keep going forever.

I'll update the collab in an hour or two i got an essay to write and ill update this for u