2/10
The eyes are far too wide spaced, and since it's a frontal view the nose should have been drawn as a centered line or single small undershadow. As it is, the nose looks as if it has been bent to the right. Also, MAJOR OVERSIGHT: no ears!!!
Learn how to draw real-anatomy human faces, then once you learn that just simplify the features to get an "anime" look. "Anime-style" is not simply assembling stylized features on a face as if it were a pizza, it's a way of redrawing faces. I hope you can understand what I'm trying to tell you.
Furthemore, if you were going for abstract Mondrian-like lines and boxes as a background, you did a good job. But if those are supposed to be buildings, please try harder.