My main character for RPG

[dannydk6]

I'm making an RPG and I just finished the basic design of my character that it would be built off of. So plz tell me how to improve it.

[Vortex00]

less big nippelzzzzz.....

[uyersuyer]

Work on the anatomy... a lot.

The basic body structure isn't -terrible,- but muscles don't look like that and nipples definitely aren't oddly-shaped half-circles with dots in the middle.

[dannydk6]

At 11/7/08 09:06 PM, Vortex00 wrote: less big nippelzzzzz.....

ok lol thats it?

[dannydk6]

At 11/7/08 09:06 PM, uyersuyer wrote: Work on the anatomy... a lot.

The basic body structure isn't -terrible,- but muscles don't look like that and nipples definitely aren't oddly-shaped half-circles with dots in the middle.

Thnx, I forgot to mention this is my first ever flash drawing

[Vortex00]

At 11/7/08 09:06 PM, dannydk6 wrote:

At 11/7/08 09:06 PM, Vortex00 wrote: less big nippelzzzzz.....

ok lol thats it?

my bad, really depends on how you define "basic design". those" basic designs" imply you will improve and detail the character more later on.

you would want to take out those super black lines in the chest area, maybe just use a darker color of the skin for those lines. Also use a reference picture to get the muscles right in the chest and arms.

And make sure the arms are overall the same length even when bent.

Also might want to loose the super wide smile too, unless he's supposed to look that way.

[dannydk6]

At 11/7/08 09:18 PM, Vortex00 wrote:

At 11/7/08 09:06 PM, dannydk6 wrote:

At 11/7/08 09:06 PM, Vortex00 wrote: less big nippelzzzzz.....

ok lol thats it?

my bad, really depends on how you define "basic design". those" basic designs" imply you will improve and detail the character more later on.

you would want to take out those super black lines in the chest area, maybe just use a darker color of the skin for those lines. Also use a reference picture to get the muscles right in the chest and arms.

And make sure the arms are overall the same length even when bent.

Also might want to loose the super wide smile too, unless he's supposed to look that way.

Ya It's my basic design and I want to improve later on But i need to know how to improve it. And you told me basically everything to improve so thanks. I'll credit you when this comes out.