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McCain : A Concentration Camp, Vietnam.
He gets thrown into a dirty cell with water dripping from a pipe overhead into a corner. The Vietnamese soldier backs out and locks the door. In the center is his maverick friend. McCain scrambles up to make sure he's Okay. "Hngngh...McCain" "

Joe America? Joe, you alright my friend?"

"No, McCain... I'mm.. dying."

"NO JOE AMERICA, YOU HAVE TO SURVIVE"

"I'm sorry, True Maverick...I'm sorry"

Joe America's last breath escapes his chapped lips. McCain, hand shaking, reaches down and his fingers touch Joe America's eye-lids. They move down, as his eye-lids conceal the bloodshot eyes of Joe America. McCain looks up at the ceiling, camera shifts down on him

" NOOOOOOOOOO, IF ONLY I WERE PRESIDENT. THIS WAR WOULD NEVER OF HAPPENED"

November 5, 2008. 4 AM

McCain, now a withered old man stands on the balcony of his home. In his hand is a Magnum pistol with one bullet loaded. A tear is shed and drips down his over-sized cheek. In the distance, as stars begin to disappear they from Joe America's face. McCain's hand trembles as he shifts the pistol to the side of his temple, slightly angled to the center of his head

"I'm sorry, Joe. I'm sorry. "

A gunshot rings through the night.

The Story of McCain

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Cool story bro


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I fucking love you, Bom.

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Poor guy. At least die of natural causes rather than kill yourself. Allow yourself to see what you could have done.

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someone make this a movie please

aww hell ill do it right now

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OH GOD MANLY TEARS.

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At 11/4/08 11:48 PM, The-Omnipresence wrote: I was thinking of this song when I read that.

My sadness is deeper then the my mom's butt, and by god am I sad.

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which one of his homes...he has 10

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At 11/4/08 11:52 PM, HolyTomato wrote: which one of his homes...he has 10

All of them.

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Hm, strange. I was thinking of this song

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Nice story man, very well done!


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At 11/5/08 12:03 AM, All-American-Badass wrote: That was deep dude

How's it feel Texan?

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that was....disturbing....made me feel depressed. awkward.

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At 11/5/08 12:06 AM, Bomshaw wrote:
a tale of woe and a lost comrade...

Dude seriiously, can I animate this? All credit goes to you

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At 11/5/08 12:16 AM, zappawadda wrote:
At 11/5/08 12:06 AM, Bomshaw wrote:
a tale of woe and a lost comrade...
Dude seriiously, can I animate this? All credit goes to you

You best be good with Flash, boy.

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At 11/4/08 11:43 PM, Bomshaw wrote: A gunshot rings through the night.

That... is... the most epic story I've ever read on Newgrounds!
Truly, a moving piece of literature that will be discussed by people until the end of time, great set-up and finish.
You can just see the despair on his withered face!

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At 11/5/08 12:22 AM, Aci6 wrote:
At 11/4/08 11:43 PM, Bomshaw wrote: A gunshot rings through the night.
You can just see the despair on his withered face!

I wouldn't say despair, just true sadness on a face etched with scars and bad memories.

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At 11/5/08 12:22 AM, Bomshaw wrote:
You best be good with Flash, boy.

ill work on it, send you some preliminary stuff.

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At 11/4/08 11:43 PM, Bomshaw wrote: McCain's hand trembles as he shifts the pistol to the side of his temple

McCain can't lift his arms that high

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