Hey I made a flash! ...but idk

[iamawesomedealwithit]

I made THIS for a business class i'm taking at school. Do you think it would pass on newgrounds? Would it be worth uploading? do you have any tips on what I could do better?

yea... I just got Flash CS4 and this is the first thing that I have made with it so I thought it would be nice to put it on newgrounds...
btw I have better things (actual movies) planned but I have very little drawing skill do they wont be as good as I envision them... (Tips Help?)
Thanks & ~Have A Nice Day!~

[Cartoon-Electra]

i dont think it would pass. no entertainment value at all..no art or animation apart from tweened text...decent audio though.

[muffinman9]

Try an entertainment flash, no one wants to see a flash you made for business. People like entertainment, make one of those and submit it to Newgrounds.

[muflubbagon1]

It would have been quite good if you'd put some people talking in it. I disagree with previous posters, in that a business related flash can be entertaining, especially when it's making fun of McDonalds.

A few tips, I would definitely avoid shape tweening, as it looks entirely unprofessional and scrappy. Also I would suggest that you try and stay clear of making the text vibrate. Good luck with your future work!