hey can i have your opion on this opening for a small zombie flash.
(in 2020 scientist have firgured out travel to place to place in to time flat. later on in the same year a man was sent to test drive a new time travel machine, he was contaiment with posion in his attemtp for sucide or so he thought.)
-----scene in the science lab with the time machine standing in front of the 2 scientist----
1 scientist: bring him in.
2 scientist: did you this son of a bitch drank the new radation and surived. its a wonder
1 scientist: i don't care we work on this for to long lets suit him up and get him ready.
-----scene changes to john rooms---
random guard- john its time for you to suit up.
john- what, fuck these scientist are worst, making go into something i don't want to. ah screw it i might actully have something pshhhhh danm american.
-----scene he has the suit on which is a bulky astronuat suit without the helm and he string attach to his back for a reel in, and has tank to hold in air if the future is deadly.----
random guard: ok, now time for you to go to the scientist and try this time travel shit out.
john: ugh fine let me take a piss.
---scene john takes piss, then walk out of the room till he meet the scientist---
1 scientist: here we are my boy now stand over there.
----scene he walk over to the X, while a small hovering camera look at john----
2 scientist: this little guy is going to record everthing, he still in the testing stage and is almsot imposible to destry.
1 scientist: enough lets start this experiment!
----scene the guard hook a line to john suit. the scientist flips the switch. light start the room is filled with spark te machine is starting, the future is happing.---
john: lets go little basturd.
----scene he walks through and see the scientist on the other side. at te same time another john is see the first john scientist but this new one's john wasn't in a suit, wasn't atni-radoactive, this john was zombie.---
machine:beep poop beop boop ebeop :D
john: it makes noise. hey what-
---scene the line broke and the machine has stop---
john: -the hell is happing. how far in the future did i go.
machine: boop beeop bopep poopb
---scene the machine fly to a caledar and see that nothing has change, keep flying and calls john. while john ignores the call of the machine he look over at the glass and see a bit of blood on it, suprised he also see a gun with ful ammo on the floor hes picks it up and follows the machine---
john: danm scientst problem screwed the future up, great mabye now i can get the hell out of hell hole.
if you want me to make the scene in bold jsut tell me. p.m if you want something in here, or just post if you think tis is worthless and sorry for the spelling mistake ima go on micosoft next time and fix it. plz tell me if you like it. and no the second john will never be seen again... or will he.
