im not sure if i should add all the cables because the building would end up looking too dull.Would end up being unnecessarily busy, same with adding a city line.
im guessing that there's too much drawing and not enough text.
-do something with the building (just doesnt look right)I thought the building and the bridge looked fine. I'm not clued up on perspective, but maybe it's compared to the bridge's perspective lines in the foreground. That, or the thinner side looks like it's width doubles at the bottom compared to the top. Or I could be talking shit.
yea i forgot to fix the width.
-might change the text (is there a better font that goes with the company?)I'd stick with the clear stylish fonts.
I'll just do something basic, and if they consider my logo, i'll work on it some more.
-i was thinking of making the bottom part of the circle (the black part with laboratory) a cog.Don't do cogs. At best, it's computational analysis work, but the cable bridge and tower are enough.
I would also experiment to reduce the colours as much as possible, like making the back circle completely orange and replacing the black with dark blue. Think the bottom of the logo needs some more love too.
i just did some quick color changes and made the building darker for some reason.
No one would want that logo, make something way more modern and simple.
well i got till November 1 to make something better
-Too many colors
-The gradient is bad
which gradient? the one in the blue circle? i thought it wasn't so noticeable. if you mean the one in the text, i'll change it, but it's not a gradient.
-Too complicated for a logo
it was the first thing that came to my mind, and the only one that i could incorporate a building bridge and cables. guess i need to do some brainstorming.