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Detail 3 - just a close up of the graffiti stuff itself - and, looks like I forgot to mention that Strawberry Clock is represented in there as well. Oh, and Angry Faic too!

At 10/5/08 02:17 AM, johnnycancer wrote: Detail 1

You should put a used condom on that big sausage thing on his head...

Wow, johnny, that is amazing! I honestly don't see what you have to finish on it because it already looks great, but I can't wait to see the final product!

At 10/4/08 07:53 PM, MiddleFingerRings wrote:

At 10/4/08 06:18 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote: I should have been working on my finals for school school but this seemed more important...

I think it would be better without any text, the joke is obvious, but funny.

Really...no text. Does anybody else feel this way?

Duh...I wrote "school school"

I need an opinion :B
Textured

or this non textured

I think i finished my angry faic one. (well, one of my two) If anyone has any suggestions, please tell me!

This is just a random idea I had, it is nowhere near finished, I could improve the detail and mabye put it into a bigger scene or something. Please tell me what you think.

At 10/5/08 02:04 PM, UnderARock wrote: I need an opinion :B
Textured

or this non textured

Definitely textured IMO

At 10/5/08 03:00 PM, BoMToons wrote:

Definitely textured IMO

thanks man, you and some people on camp north settled my mind :3

At 10/5/08 03:29 PM, UnderARock wrote: thanks man, you and some people on camp north settled my mind :3

That is creepy / awesome. I expect to see it on the calendar.

Takin a break from my sketchbook tour to work on this today.

Moar updates, still needs detail on bg but don't know if I'll add more characters, what do you think?

also pnis

At 10/5/08 04:43 PM, Luis wrote: Takin a break from my sketchbook tour to work on this today.

pffff that's terrible. Quit while you're ahead.

btw, lvl1? noobomg

LOL I loved your cock joke

What do you all think of my pic?, is it any good? improvements?

At 10/5/08 05:55 PM, DroidFish wrote: What do you all think of my pic?, is it any good? improvements?

Less blue.

At 10/5/08 06:02 PM, KupaMan wrote:

At 10/5/08 05:55 PM, DroidFish wrote: What do you all think of my pic?, is it any good? improvements?

Less blue.

but its the summer, blue sky and water are what makes it summery

At 10/5/08 12:05 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote: Really...no text. Does anybody else feel this way?

I vote for keep the text - I'm not sure the joke was that obvious

At 10/5/08 05:55 PM, DroidFish wrote: What do you all think of my pic?, is it any good? improvements?

I would probably get rid of the sun's glare effect on the left half of the picture - I think without the sun actually in the picture to provide a source for the light, it ends up looking more like fog or haze. I like the general concept though - although, I think there's at least one other tankmen summer entry, so, you might want to add some other Newgrounds characters or do something to try and make yours distinguishable from the others.

At 10/5/08 06:16 PM, johnnycancer wrote:

At 10/5/08 12:05 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote: Really...no text. Does anybody else feel this way?

I vote for keep the text - I'm not sure the joke was that obvious

Yea I think your right, there will be some dumass looking at that going "Chickens? I dont get it!" but he should remove the website, of course its NG thats where you buy them :P

At 10/5/08 06:23 PM, johnnycancer wrote:

At 10/5/08 05:55 PM, DroidFish wrote: What do you all think of my pic?, is it any good? improvements?

I would probably get rid of the sun's glare effect on the left half of the picture - I think without the sun actually in the picture to provide a source for the light, it ends up looking more like fog or haze. I like the general concept though - although, I think there's at least one other tankmen summer entry, so, you might want to add some other Newgrounds characters or do something to try and make yours distinguishable from the others.

Yeah I might do somthing about the glare, but Im keeping it all tankmen because I feel other charaters would spoil it.

At 10/5/08 05:55 PM, DroidFish wrote: What do you all think of my pic?, is it any good? improvements?

Two things:
The city skyline is not so obviously a city, I'd suggest redrawing it, and probably use a different colour. (Just the skyline obviously, not the whole picture.)
Secondly, The shells on the sand, make it more obvious that they are on sand. Have the shell sitting in the sand, rather than on it.

Really nice picture so far, great work on everything else!

Thanks for the advise, I'll look into it tomorrow but now (for me) its 11:40 so I CBA to do it now

Right, probably finished. Before I post this to the art thread, any little or large fuck-ups visible?

Use this larger size, a lot of detail is lost in the one below.

At 10/5/08 07:01 PM, MiddleFingerRings wrote: Right, probably finished. Before I post this to the art thread, any little or large fuck-ups visible?

Use this larger size, a lot of detail is lost in the one below.

Nope, its all good :D

At 10/5/08 07:01 PM, MiddleFingerRings wrote: Right, probably finished. Before I post this to the art thread, any little or large fuck-ups visible?

Use this larger size, a lot of detail is lost in the one below.

Aside from Burnt Face Man's pose looking a little awkward, I would say you're probably good - and, I understand that you pretty much have to have his arm bending like that if you're going to fit him and Bastard Man into the same picture, without having to entirely redraw the thing. But, no, I don't think there's any large, glaring errors.

Before you submit (unless you already have, then totally disregard this next paragraph), I'd suggest spending as much time on your piece as possible. I mean, the deadline's not until the 15th, so, that gives you 10 more days to work - so you might as well take advantage of that. Right now I'm aiming for submitting sometime around the 13th - I figure that will give me enough time to nitpick my own work, change anything that needs to be changed, and add in any details that I absolutely won't be able to live with myself if I don't include them.

Not to imply that your work needs more time - I think it stands up well as a finished piece - I just mean, if you have any hesitations, you won't lose anything by waiting a day or two to submit your final product.

Oh, one last suggestion - people will probably disagree with me, but, I think the picture would benefit from having the title of the series included as text, along with maybe the tagline from the series - "Burnt Face Man: Crime is a shit that needs wiping up!" or something like that. Just my opinion.

mr wippy

At 10/5/08 08:04 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: mr wippy

VERY VERY NICE

man i really hope Myhatisbluewins or you, because if millburn, or luis, or another one of the usuals win, man it would be soo rigged....

well thats just my opinion, bitch about it if you want

Im about 40% done with mine

At 10/5/08 09:37 PM, WAaAzZAaA wrote: man i really hope Myhatisbluewins or you, because if millburn, or luis, or another one of the usuals win, man it would be soo rigged....

There are TWELVE spots... the best will win regardless of whose it is... there is no favoritism or rigging going on! >:( I kinda wanted to let everyone that enters have a vote... but I don't know if there will be time. You'd all have to send me your top 12 within a day or two after the contest ends. Whaddayathink?

A note to all... if yours gets picked and it turns out the final file is unusable, it will get bumped... there just isn't enough time to mess around! So PLEASE make sure your setting are right (size, res, etc.). Thanks!

What do you guys think?