At 1/7/09 04:42 AM, Tystarr wrote:
Ok I need serious critique..the pic was comin out well but now it looks horrible..
It looks way too muddled and messy. . any ideas?
ha!! I really like it!! It took me a few seconds to realize what he had in his mouth though (it's supposed to give the impression of a cigar, right?). It might help if you changed the angle of it a bit. Right now it's the same as his arm, so it doesn't stand out (thought it was part of him at first) ...maybe show more of the underside of it... and possible exaggerate the curve of his upper lip a bit more so it looks more like it's in his mouth (more, more, more!).
It might also help if cleaned up your lines and some of the shading. Looks like you just sorta gave up on his right hand :P ...I like how he's digging his claw into the pavement... you could exaggerate that a bit more too ...and I'd really like to see a little bit of light/reflection on his eyes to give it that glossy/moist feel... some sort of texture differentiation ...if you know what I mean!
do 'I' even know what I mean? probably not.