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At 11/16/08 02:07 AM, xTOXICxEMPIRE wrote: Here's the concept sketch of it. Key words "CONCEPT SKETCH", hence the no buildings and bad shading.

Based on absolutely no authority whatsoever, I'm going to give you the go ahead. Add a building and some color like you've said you're going to and you're good to go.

out of interest, when's the closing date for this collab?

At 11/16/08 04:27 AM, mikedood wrote: out of interest, when's the closing date for this collab?

READ THE FIRST BLOODY POST ITS THE 30th. >:C

WIP
not sure whether I like the scales or not.
and the texture I want to use for the building is bugging me.
The quality isn't maxed either as it filesize was too big :(

At 11/16/08 08:25 AM, SirNightOwl wrote: WIP
not sure whether I like the scales or not.
and the texture I want to use for the building is bugging me.
The quality isn't maxed either as it filesize was too big :(

I agree with you about the building, but I think the scales are fine. Don't worry about the filesize now, when you're absolutely finished just link to a full-quality picture. :)

At 11/16/08 08:25 AM, SirNightOwl wrote: wah my pint got spilt

You puff.
It's a great pic, mate.

At 11/16/08 09:09 AM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote:

At 11/16/08 08:25 AM, SirNightOwl wrote: wah my pint got spilt

You puff.
It's a great pic, mate.

You MURDERED my pint!!
and what do you know about good pics, I've seen your work, a retarded puppy could do better.

I may do some touch ups etc, but I'm pretty happy with it's current state. Hopefully the quality will hold but I'll put a link/PM a link so you can have a full qual in the near future.

I call it: "Turkeyonastick's Mum during the phase known as PMT"
love you mate :3

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

not finished

Don't make him mad.. he'll eat you

At 11/16/08 05:54 PM, Bl00dRedKnife wrote: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

not finished

Awesome!

Piranha Man ...or something! lol

git in mah bellay!!!

At 11/17/08 03:54 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: Piranha Man ...or something! lol

Haha! That's awesome. Love the style ReNae

Here's an update... terrible perspectives. I intend on adding more textures.

Wow, I'm the epitome of dip shit

Here's the image.

Gahhhhhhhhhhh /self loath

people like to hang out while the city is being destroyed and overun with skeltons :O

WIP again, spent quite a while on it,
Can you guess the film? One of my favourites!
Quick Cloverfield trivia!
> All the characters have myspace pages which haven't been logged in to since the release except Hud's to change his height to about 2ft 6.
> The name is discussed as either coming from a) a road sign JJ Abrams passes on the way to work or b) because a cloverfield is the first thing to grow after a nuclear diaster (apparently)
> The company that Rob is going to work for is supposely a japanese 'Slusho' firm. In the ending of the film you are supposed to see a satellite falling into the ocean which causes the awakening of the monster "Clover" even though I STILLcan't see the damn satellite and I'm not sure why a Slusho drink firm has a satellite.
> At the end of the credits you hear Rob say "Help us" and played backwards it says "It's still alive" sparking the (now truthful) rumours of a sequel to be released next year.

Anywho back to art. Wanted to go for a cartoony Cloverfield piccie, so spent a while on it [I'm still getting into the swing of things) and then during a break read "In more detailed terms, you need to draw the monster, AND the building it's destroying." on the first post. So I haven't stopped crying since.

Oh snap! I forgot all about this! Off to work I goooooooooooooooooooooooo

This should not be allowed to fall down to the second page when there's only 12 days left to contribute. Here's a slight update on my Luchador; sorry it's not anything spectacularly different, but, I just wanted to make sure the final version was in here somewhere.

At 11/17/08 03:54 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: Piranha Man ...or something! lol

git in mah bellay!!!

Oh how I envy you.

At 11/17/08 03:54 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: Piranha Man ...or something! lol

Better than my pirahna man.

good work.

So here is my little sketch of a possible entry
Did this in about 30 minutes, counting endless erasures of failures
If you can't tell (and I wouldn't blame you), corny as it sounds, it's a dragon spirit being summoned to wreak havoc on a city
I promise it will be more understandable if and when I finish this bad boy

well, sorry McJesus and johnny cancer, i have to drop out.
im swamped with a lot of projects, and school is being a bitch (as always)

looking forward for the collab.
hope its awesome.

Peace.

At 11/18/08 10:54 PM, WAaAzZAaA wrote: well, sorry McJesus and johnny cancer, i have to drop out.
im swamped with a lot of projects, and school is being a bitch (as always)

It's that time of year. I have finals coming up too so I'm about to become a ghost on here myself.

Wip, commentary will be appreciated.

At 11/17/08 03:54 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: Piranha Man ...or something! lol

Absolutely <3 your work ReNaeNae!

At 11/18/08 03:59 PM, johnnycancer wrote: This should not be allowed to fall down to the second page when there's only 12 days left to contribute.

Hmmm... Well, this just looks absolutely awesome.
However, if I was to point out one design flaw, it would be that the body is just a little bit to small for the head for my liking. But it looks awesome apart from that.

At 11/19/08 07:49 AM, Sawdust wrote: Wip, commentary will be appreciated.

Um... whut?
It looks like a naked... claw... monkey thing.

Anyway, I've almost finished year eleven! YAY!
Just one more day, a weekend, and then exams D:

At 11/19/08 08:02 AM, xTOXICxEMPIRE wrote: Um... whut?
It looks like a naked... claw... monkey thing.

What should I do with it to make it pretty

At 11/19/08 08:32 AM, Sawdust wrote:

At 11/19/08 08:02 AM, xTOXICxEMPIRE wrote: Um... whut?
It looks like a naked... claw... monkey thing.

What should I do with it to make it pretty

Well, this is a WIP, right?
I can't really tell you how to draw it, as I don't know what you want the end result to look like.
What I CAN tell you however, is how to fix it up a bit (you probably know this anyway).
First off: Get rid of the horrible sketchy lines. Well, once you've done all the lineart and such.
Secondly: The robot leg. It's tiny? And the composition doesn't look right, if he is just standing at the base of the picture.
Thirdly: What the hell is going on with his face? I'll just go ahead and assume you haven't put details in yet.
Fourth: His robot arm is bent in a REALLY unusual position, even for a bionic arm. Point his arm downwards more, then loosen the wrist. Oh, and the wires protrude way too much. Tangle them around the arm, not away from it.
Fifth: Change the claw a bit. It's just... put on there. Make it bigger, and then either stich it on, or bolt it or. Or fade to skin colour.
Sixth: His right leg. What's it doing? It's just a weird, unatural position. Point it downwards more, because it looks like he's trying to do the splits over two buildings, and failing.
And lastly, Seventh: Personally, I would like to see more detail. Add some iron plating, or more bionic parts showing through underneath his skin. Too much negative space on his body.

Anyway, I hope it helps! Good luck!

i can't believe i'm actually in this awesome collab.

At 11/16/08 06:53 PM, Alexman159 wrote: Don't make him mad.. he'll eat you

I meant to comment earlier that this makes me incredibly happy.

Bump before this goes to the 2nd page.

Slight update.

Textures and more detail.

No! my file is too big, so here's a direct link.

At 11/19/08 10:25 PM, Slippery-Nipple wrote: Bump before this goes to the 2nd page.

Slight update.

Textures and more detail.

No! my file is too big, so here's a direct link.

You know, the more you put into it the better it gets. I'm really glad that you didn't allow yourself to get discouraged and decided to finish this.