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RedHotPoker
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Blar 2008-09-20 13:05:06 Reply

How can i improve this?

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Response to Blar 2008-09-20 13:17:06 Reply

Colour.

[ Candy - T'ird - Elephant - Chocolate - Cruelty ]

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Response to Blar 2008-09-20 13:56:44 Reply

color

throwing shaved squirrels at angry rabits will only result in hilarious situations, not the genetic binding of the two animals, :*(

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Response to Blar 2008-09-20 13:57:00 Reply

Add a neck. Add some ears. Move the 'smoke' so it doesn't look like it's part of his face. His lips look too feminine and too low ...make what you have now into just a shadow of the lower lip, since the mustache would technically cover the top one, and have the cigarette stick out under the mustache.

Otherwise, looks good ;)

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Response to Blar 2008-09-20 19:09:43 Reply
At 9/20/08 01:17 PM, Xaxrox wrote: Colour.

British.

At 9/20/08 01:56 PM, SynicalSatire wrote: color

American.

Oh, and you could change the mustache because I thought it was his teeth. I like your edgy style.