Hey I just Finish a couple designs of characters from my story I'm working on let me know what you think.
:D
the first guys name is called Chaos.
here is the second guy his name is Chi
I will be posting more characters soon :P
the quality on Chis pic was bad and I can't figure out how to delete it lol so I'm going to post a better quality pic of it
Yeah that's definetly soul edge, just less pink n' meaty.
The second one kinda generic, but I like how you did the coat. Also, even though you can't really see it in the pic, his face could do with some work.
With the first one however, the clothes certainly do NOT go with the charcter. I mean, first of all, c'mon! HIS NAME IS CHAOS! something crazy, something original. I torn cape, with long draped ripped up robes with a red edge, or sleeves that end in claws. But a jumper and pants? LOLWHUT!?
Sorry man if it sounds a bit harsh, its some great drawing, it just needs some tidying up with the details, and you need to relate the character's personality, with how he looks, which includes his clothes.
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At 8/11/08 10:46 PM, McZero wrote: Chi's Blade looks like Soul Edge...
Yeah thats were I got the idea for it lol, it will probably be changed soon cause these are not the final design
At 8/12/08 07:21 AM, xTOXICxEMPIRE wrote: The second one kinda generic, but I like how you did the coat. Also, even though you can't really see it in the pic, his face could do with some work.
With the first one however, the clothes certainly do NOT go with the charcter. I mean, first of all, c'mon! HIS NAME IS CHAOS! something crazy, something original. I torn cape, with long draped ripped up robes with a red edge, or sleeves that end in claws. But a jumper and pants? LOLWHUT!?
Sorry man if it sounds a bit harsh, its some great drawing, it just needs some tidying up with the details, and you need to relate the character's personality, with how he looks, which includes his clothes.
thanks for the idea I never really work much on his out fit his name is Chaos because of his attitude not on the clothes but thanks for the Idea I might take that :P and yeah I know the first one face needs to be better :P but like I said there not there final design just putting them up here to see what people think of them so far so thanks for the comment :D
Wow, they are really good, i wish i could draw suff from m imagination that well. Post the story aswell once you are done, i'de love to read it.
At 8/12/08 10:59 AM, Oseus wrote: Wow, they are really good, i wish i could draw suff from m imagination that well. Post the story aswell once you are done, i'de love to read it.
yeah I will thanks fro the comment the story will be a graphic novel so I will post the panels of the story on ng :D
I like the face of the first one... And thats about it.
I think you can use some work on them both...
At 8/12/08 11:29 AM, fhfhfh wrote: I like the face of the first one... And thats about it.
I think you can use some work on them both...
Thanks my favorite part is the face as well and yeah they both still need lots of work :P before I call them done
At 8/12/08 10:17 AM, Drakenyaze wrote:At 8/12/08 07:21 AM, xTOXICxEMPIRE wrote: The second one kinda generic, but I like how you did the coat. Also, even though you can't really see it in the pic, his face could do with some work.thanks for the idea I never really work much on his out fit his name is Chaos because of his attitude not on the clothes but thanks for the Idea I might take that :P and yeah I know the first one face needs to be better :P but like I said there not there final design just putting them up here to see what people think of them so far so thanks for the comment :D
With the first one however, the clothes certainly do NOT go with the charcter. I mean, first of all, c'mon! HIS NAME IS CHAOS! something crazy, something original. I torn cape, with long draped ripped up robes with a red edge, or sleeves that end in claws. But a jumper and pants? LOLWHUT!?
Sorry man if it sounds a bit harsh, its some great drawing, it just needs some tidying up with the details, and you need to relate the character's personality, with how he looks, which includes his clothes.
I completely agree with xTOXICxEMPIRE. If he is called Chaos for his personality, then shouldn't his personality manifest itself in the clothes he wears? The first picture just did not seem believable to me because you have this thing with a hellish face and an incredible scythe, but he is wearing what appears to me to be a long sleeve t-shirt and jeans. It just does not fit.
I completely agree with xTOXICxEMPIRE. If he is called Chaos for his personality, then shouldn't his personality manifest itself in the clothes he wears? The first picture just did not seem believable to me because you have this thing with a hellish face and an incredible scythe, but he is wearing what appears to me to be a long sleeve t-shirt and jeans. It just does not fit.
yeah I just did not really no what type of out fit to give him yet so I pretty much gave him a basic shirt a paints for now, but don't worry he will soon have an outfit that fits his personality :d and thanks for commenting
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Hey well I took the idea to change Chaos out fit to something other then shirt and paints and here it is so far let me know what you think of it
Drakenyaze :P
Sweet, Thats much better... although a scar on his face/neck, would be cool
At 8/12/08 09:50 PM, Drakenyaze wrote: Hey well I took the idea to change Chaos out fit to something other then shirt and paints and here it is so far let me know what you think of it
That looks SO much better, seriously. Love the arm with all the bands on it, and the claw goes brilliantly with the whole outfit. Nice.
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the first guy needs more stature defanition (if you know what i mean)
he is to stick like in that pic to rly show off who he can be
try poseing him in a more natural stance like teh second guy
there both rly good
At 8/12/08 09:50 PM, Drakenyaze wrote: Hey well I took the idea to change Chaos out fit to something other then shirt and paints and here it is so far let me know what you think of it
Drakenyaze :P
I don't know if this should be awarded the "Most Arm Belts" badge, or the "Hold Your Arms As Straight As Possible" trophy.
xTOXICxEMPIRE
That looks SO much better, seriously. Love the arm with all the bands on it, and the claw goes brilliantly with the whole outfit. Nice.
Thanks I will be posting it again when more of it gets done and glad you like this one :P thanks for another comment :P
Tekedo
the first guy needs more stature defanition (if you know what i mean)
he is to stick like in that pic to rly show off who he can be
try poseing him in a more natural stance like teh second guy
there both rly good
Thanks I will eventually draw him in a more natural stance once I done the whole drawing I draw him standing normal or doing some thing :D thanks for the comment
KupaMan
I don't know if this should be awarded the "Most Arm Belts" badge, or the "Hold Your Arms As Straight As Possible" trophy.
Yeah can I have both lol :P, anyways I just drawing the designs right now so I really did not want to put much movement to the pictures so for the next time I drawing them I know what go were lol, Thanks for the comment
Krayon
Nice style, more shading.
Yeah actually there is a lot of shading it just my scanner does not pick up my light shading that's is drawn with pencil I going to darken the shading so it can be shown on the next pic, thanks for the comment :P
Here is an update on the picture so far got some more stuff to do on the picture, just felt like posting it :D
Very cool. Like this a whole lot better than before! LOL
Happy face for your troubles! -> :D (Yeah!)
At 8/14/08 12:48 PM, Hellknight1000 wrote: Very cool. Like this a whole lot better than before! LOL
Happy face for your troubles! -> :D (Yeah!)
BTW!!! Here's a link to my artwork since you DID say you wanted to comment! :P
So here you go!Hellknight1000's Artwork
Hello again just putting up a picture I'm working on again lol :P, let me know what u think, the girl in the pic is not done yet
At 8/19/08 09:05 PM, Drakenyaze wrote: Hello again just putting up a picture I'm working on again lol :P, let me know what u think, the girl in the pic is not done yet
Cool...and scary.
Keep it up! Chaos is really coming along nicely! :P
At 8/19/08 09:05 PM, Drakenyaze wrote: Hello again just putting up a picture I'm working on again lol :P, let me know what u think, the girl in the pic is not done yet
Roughly how tall is this guy? He is bent over and he is still head-and shoulders above the girl. If that is intentional, then I think you did a good job.
At 8/20/08 04:45 PM, JT1 wrote:At 8/19/08 09:05 PM, Drakenyaze wrote: Hello again just putting up a picture I'm working on again lol :P, let me know what u think, the girl in the pic is not done yetRoughly how tall is this guy? He is bent over and he is still head-and shoulders above the girl. If that is intentional, then I think you did a good job.
Yeah he is really tall lol and thanks I was intentional planning that one lol :P
