My pic

[Carimoko]

I was bored so I drawed a picture. Opinions please ....

Ps. The chin has to be big!

[Insanimation]

At 7/25/08 05:08 AM, Carimoko wrote: I was bored so I drawed a picture. Opinions please ....

Ps. The chin has to be big!

Hmm...well, I'd reduce the smudging..I'm all for smudging, but that just looks like you rubbed your hand up and down the pic without thinking..also, the rest of the body is very spiky, but the hand is smooth, and it doesn't fit in..it's not a bad pic though..

[Carimoko]

Next pic ...

[Carimoko]

Well I was bored you know ...

[Penboy]

At 7/25/08 05:50 AM, Carimoko wrote: Well I was bored you know ...

That's got nothing to do with ability or skill.

Here's some criticism:

1st pic
As the guy above me said, it's too smudged. His face is way to pointed; I could juice lemons with that chin. The wrinkles on his shirt are awkward, try drawing from reference to get a feel for it. I know you've tried to draw jeans crotch-thing, but in all honestly it looks like his penis. Draw the sides a little wider and it should be good. His right hand, like the wrinkles, look awkward. Try using reference pics. And there's no real need to define his (?) pectoral muscles in the sort of outfit he's wearing, becasue he has a slender waist.

2nd pic
My favorite out of the two, the hair looks good and the 'flow' seems right (as in it starts from the top right and ends up at the bottom left, like a backwards C). However the dress thing ruins the overall flow, I'd make it more thinner; make it hug the woman's body a bit more.

:D

[gamerguy314]

For the first Picture, im not gonna comment on the facial structure and that kind of stuff (anime has pointy chins) but his right hand .-. you gotta put some detail to help show that he's showing his palm, not just by how his fingers are, but the creases and such.

[acesofhearts]

I admit your a good artist, but I just don't see any emotion in your art.