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Forum Topic: How do I improve on my comic idea?

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Streetfighting cats & dogs who fight crime-it's a multicultural comic-it's Catillac Cats meets Street Fighter. They meet with other groups of streetfighting cats & dogs around their town, the country and the world and become allies and help in their fight against evil and become part of their group, & fight evil streetfighting cats and dogs.

The heroes will sometimes become superheroes & the villians supervillians.

Typical things that happen-they find a valubale mineral reseve under the town-the military gets involved and the bad guys want to get their hands on the mineral.

The heroes work on some new defense tech and the villians go and spy on them.

The villians plot to find ways to get rid of the heroes.

The heroes meet with pals/relatives and it's a chance to stop local baddies in those areas.

The main character decides to fight crime 'cause his dad was a cop.

His sidekick is more brains than brawn and they both have a scientific prodigy friend they go to for tech help.


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At first, when i saw your thread title, i decided i would post "give up on it" and then lol about it quietly to myself, before offering constructive criticism.
But now, after reading your post, i have to say give up on it. I'm sorry, it just sounds like a terrible idea.

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This is how

Galadriel: It began with the forging of the Great Rings. Three were given to the Elves; immortal, wisest and fairest of all beings. Seven, to the Dwarf Lords, great miners and craftsmen of the mountain halls. And nine, nine rings were gifted to the race of Men, who above all else desire power. For within these rings was bound the strength and the will to govern over each race. But they were all of them deceived, for a new ring was made. In the land of Mordor, in the fires of Mount Doom, the Dark Lord Sauron forged in secret, a master ring, to control all others. And into this ring he poured all his cruelty, his malice and his will to dominate all life. One ring to rule them all. One by one, the free peoples of Middle Earth fell to the power of the Ring. But there were some who resisted. A last alliance of men and elves marched against the armies of Mordor, and on the very slopes of Mount Doom, they fought for the freedom of Middle-Earth. Victory was near, but the power of the ring could not be undone. It was in this moment, when all hope had faded, that Isildur, son of the king, took up his father's sword. And Sauron, enemy of the free peoples of Middle-Earth, was defeated. The Ring passed to Isildur, who had this one chance to destroy evil forever, but the hearts of men are easily corrupted. And the ring of power has a will of its own. It betrayed Isildur, to his death. And some things that should not have been forgotten were lost. History became legend. Legend became myth. And for two and a half thousand years, the ring passed out of all knowledge. Until, when chance came, the ring ensnared another bearer. The ring came to the creature Gollum, who took it deep into the tunnels under the Misty Mountains, and there it consumed him. The ring gave to Gollum unnatural long life. For five hundred years it poisoned his mind; and in the gloom of Gollum's cave, it waited. Darkness crept back into the forests of the world. Rumor grew of a shadow in the East, whispers of a nameless fear, and the Ring of Power perceived. Its time had now come. It abandoned Gollum. But then something happened that the Ring did not intend. It was picked up by the most unlikely creature imaginable. A hobbit, Bilbo Baggins, of the Shire. For the time will soon come when hobbits will shape the fortunes of all...


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At 7/19/08 11:59 AM, HungarianSupermarket wrote: At first, when i saw your thread title, i decided i would post "give up on it" and then lol about it quietly to myself, before offering constructive criticism.
But now, after reading your post, i have to say give up on it. I'm sorry, it just sounds like a terrible idea.

Why? Because they are furries? Kids like furries.


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At 7/19/08 12:00 PM, ngman7 wrote:
At 7/19/08 11:59 AM, HungarianSupermarket wrote: At first, when i saw your thread title, i decided i would post "give up on it" and then lol about it quietly to myself, before offering constructive criticism.
But now, after reading your post, i have to say give up on it. I'm sorry, it just sounds like a terrible idea.
Why? Because they are furries? Kids like furries.

Well, i suppose that was the first thing that put me off. But it seems like you grabbed a whole bunch of cliches and stuck them all together with some kind of crazy cliche sticky-tape. It all just sounds so unoriginal. perhaps try spending some time thinking of some decent storylines and put lots of thought and background into your characters. Make them original. And people. People work better than animals..

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At 7/19/08 11:59 AM, Jerich0 wrote: This is how...

I'm writing a cartoon book about streetfighting cats and dogs. How do I make MY IDEA more interesting to get people to want to read it?


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At 7/19/08 12:04 PM, HungarianSupermarket wrote:
At 7/19/08 12:00 PM, ngman7 wrote:

Why? Because they are furries? Kids like furries.
Well, i suppose that was the first thing that put me off. But it seems like you grabbed a whole bunch of cliches and stuck them all together with some kind of crazy cliche sticky-tape. It all just sounds so unoriginal. perhaps try spending some time thinking of some decent storylines and put lots of thought and background into your characters. Make them original. And people. People work better than animals..

Again, why? Cats and dogs work because they are territorial. I want to do a cartoon book because cartooning is something I am good at.

Darkwing Duck was a popular hero back in the day.

M.C. Skat Kat was a popular music video icon..
The Catillac Cats was a popular cartoon.

I was alos thinking of The Warriors when I thought of this.


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At 7/19/08 12:09 PM, ngman7 wrote:
At 7/19/08 12:04 PM, HungarianSupermarket wrote:
At 7/19/08 12:00 PM, ngman7 wrote:

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Again, why? Cats and dogs work because they are territorial. I want to do a cartoon book because cartooning is something I am good at.

Darkwing Duck was a popular hero back in the day.

M.C. Skat Kat was a popular music video icon..
The Catillac Cats was a popular cartoon.

I was alos thinking of The Warriors when I thought of this.

Eh, i kinda see your point. I don't really read comics myself, and i'm just giving you my opinion. But that's all it is. An opinion. So you do what you wish with your comic.

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At 7/19/08 12:14 PM, HungarianSupermarket wrote:

Eh, i kinda see your point. I don't really read comics myself, and i'm just giving you my opinion. But that's all it is. An opinion. So you do what you wish with your comic.

Okay-but leaving my underlying idea the way it it is-what would you change or add to make people want to read it? I have been working on it for years.


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Does anyone else have any input?


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At 7/19/08 01:32 PM, ngman7 wrote: Does anyone else have any input?

Stop stealing ideas from Marvel and DC Comics, bro. All you did was add Cats and Dogs.


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At 7/19/08 01:34 PM, MisterUnderstood wrote:
At 7/19/08 01:32 PM, ngman7 wrote: Does anyone else have any input?
Stop stealing ideas from Marvel and DC Comics, bro. All you did was add Cats and Dogs.

What are you talking about? I got inspiration from Darkwing Duck, Catillac Cats, Street Fighter and the Warriors, and Popeye.


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Dude, it sounds horrible. Don't write comics. It's a hard thing.


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At 7/19/08 01:47 PM, StickyWicky wrote: Dude, it sounds horrible. Don't write comics. It's a hard thing.

WHY? WHY DOES IT SOUND HORRIBLE?

THIS IS COMIC BOOK GOLD.

I have ideas for original superheroes and action heroes-I'll start a new thread on it.

The main heroes decide to get a supergroup going and they have branches in other areas.


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I'm sorry, I have no ways to improve your gay furry porn comic, it fails too hard

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I remember you, you're the gay guy who thinks about men instead of women. How is your day going?


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At 7/19/08 01:53 PM, valium9 wrote: I'm sorry, I have no ways to improve your gay furry porn comic, it fails too hard

There are girl gangs in it.


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At 7/19/08 01:56 PM, ngman7 wrote:
At 7/19/08 01:53 PM, valium9 wrote: I'm sorry, I have no ways to improve your gay furry porn comic, it fails too hard
There are girl gangs in it.

Wow, you're not going to make it better with badly drawn lesbian gang porn, if that's what you mean.


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At 7/19/08 01:57 PM, MisterUnderstood wrote:
At 7/19/08 01:56 PM, ngman7 wrote:
At 7/19/08 01:53 PM, valium9 wrote: I'm sorry, I have no ways to improve your gay furry porn comic, it fails too hard
There are girl gangs in it.
Wow, you're not going to make it better with badly drawn lesbian gang porn, if that's what you mean.

Badly drawn furry lesbian gang porn

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At 7/19/08 01:57 PM, MisterUnderstood wrote:
At 7/19/08 01:56 PM, ngman7 wrote:
At 7/19/08 01:53 PM, valium9 wrote: I'm sorry, I have no ways to improve your gay furry porn comic, it fails too hard
There are girl gangs in it.
Wow, you're not going to make it better with badly drawn lesbian gang porn, if that's what you mean.

NO-and stop flaming. >:(

Why do you people think my comic is gay?

I'm targeting it to children.


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At 7/19/08 02:08 PM, ngman7 wrote: NO-and stop flaming. >:(

Why do you people think my comic is gay?

I'm targeting it to children.

You're targeting naked children?


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At 7/19/08 02:10 PM, Gunkster wrote:
At 7/19/08 02:08 PM, ngman7 wrote: NO-and stop flaming. >:(

Why do you people think my comic is gay?

I'm targeting it to children.
You're targeting naked children?

badly drawn gay and lesbian furry child porn comic it is then

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At 7/19/08 02:10 PM, Gunkster wrote:
At 7/19/08 02:08 PM, ngman7 wrote: NO-and stop flaming. >:(

Why do you people think my comic is gay?

I'm targeting it to children.
You're targeting naked children?

NO-KIDS LIKE CARTOON ANIMALS- KIDS LIKE ACTION.

You're going to have good guys and gool girls and bad guys and bad girls.

STOP MAKING FUN OF MY IDEA.


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No, that idea is shit. Give up on it.


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At 7/19/08 02:22 PM, gamerdakota wrote: No, that idea is shit. Give up on it.

NO YOU HEATHEN-I will not.

I will make it multicultural-so it will reflect different cultures and different countries.

HOW MANY BLACK POSTERS HERE LIKE MY IDEA?


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NO-KIDS LIKE CARTOON ANIMALS- KIDS LIKE ACTION.

You're going to have good guys and gool girls and bad guys and bad girls.

STOP MAKING FUN OF MY IDEA.

Can you draw? Most of the time the value of a comic or anything with an artistic direction involves allot of drawing. Just like a book requires allot of written detail. Untill you draw your ideas you can not really make out what is a good idea or not. Well you could also think allot about it, but for this drawing out your ideas will help.

unless your an alt looking for some fun troll posting

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At 7/19/08 02:24 PM, IammeoramI wrote:
NO-KIDS LIKE CARTOON ANIMALS- KIDS LIKE ACTION.

You're going to have good guys and gool girls and bad guys and bad girls.

STOP MAKING FUN OF MY IDEA.
Can you draw? Most of the time the value of a comic or anything with an artistic direction involves allot of drawing.

YES-if I had a scanner I'd showcase some of my art at deviantart.com.

There are all types of villians the heroes can fight-maybe an evil nerd with an internet marketing schene that invloves time travel, gangsters who steal special gems to harness special weapons, evil cowboys who commit crimes to put business people out of business, etc.

The main hero has an evil doppelganer who is is arch-nemesis forms his own gang.
The hero has a black version of himself who's part of his team.


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There are all types of street gangs-sports gangs, black gangs, Hispanic gangs, rock gnags, hip-hop gangs, skateboarding gangs, cowboy gangs, gangs in other countries-all of which are in my book

You people NEVER saw THE WARRIORS?


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If I don't make the characters culturalistic stereotypes it will work.

Anyone have any suggestions as to how I can give my comic more of an action-hero/superhero feel to it?


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At 7/19/08 02:40 PM, ngman7 wrote:

Hey whoa, whoa, whoa! Lay off the idea juice!
If your going to make a show or comics for any diffinite reason you need to make a main character, (or characters) in the chaos of all these ideas! You know for plot delopment, and rational story develpoment. As well as complex secondary character with personallitys, as well as a unique world. Mix it all together, and hopefully you have something worth reading or watching.
Unless you don't than most of this is begging to be flamed.


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