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[J-Zef]

i am new, but no stranger to the site. i just want to know if you guys think i have talent

[Frox1k]

yeah sure good job.Keep on drawing stuff like that and you will feel the progress(next time try to make the picture more realistic)

[J-Zef]

i don't know if it was supposed to look real or not, i drew it a few years ago.

[saltovergray]

Everything is alright, except the arms and face+hair.

The hair is messed up, just scribbles. The face has wretched anatomy. The arms are just curves.

But it's nice. Reminds me of Luke Skywalker.

[J-Zef]

heres another

[J-Zef]

yeah i used to make this comic called chainsaw bob and i watched A LOT of star wars. this was just a simple sketch.

[Maxxor]

At 7/6/08 02:25 PM, J-Zef wrote: i just want to know if you guys think i have talent

Talent is worthless. Dedication and practice is the only thing that matters.

[J-Zef]

believe me school didn't teach me anything...it just improved my artwork.

[MikeRomanul]

Original picture looks... off. Is the wind flowing left to right like his jacket indicates? Then why isn't his hair flowing the same way? Also you could work on the pose a bit and the hands don't look like they're quite gripping the laser.

[J-Zef]

the hair...he uses gel, i also am probably not going to do any more on that one because i drew it out of boredom in science class and to change the picture would be to change the memory

[lilcheeselad]

Its good but, whats he holding?