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Posted at: 6/27/08 10:55 PM

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Here is the main character for my comic possibly-cartoon.
anything that you don't like about the character?

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Posted at: 6/27/08 10:58 PM

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Pretty good, simple enough for a cartoon character.

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Posted at: 6/27/08 11:12 PM

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The head is pretty cool looking.


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Posted at: 6/27/08 11:14 PM

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At 6/27/08 11:12 PM, MegaMelmo wrote: The head is pretty cool looking.

haha thanks man...I think overdid the hair a bit though, lol...

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Posted at: 6/27/08 11:16 PM

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At 6/27/08 11:14 PM, willobeen wrote:
At 6/27/08 11:12 PM, MegaMelmo wrote: The head is pretty cool looking.
haha thanks man...I think overdid the hair a bit though, lol...

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Posted at: 6/27/08 11:31 PM

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the toes look... deformed somehow?

or is my perspective off again?

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Posted at: 6/27/08 11:37 PM

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At 6/27/08 11:31 PM, kernalphage wrote: the toes look... deformed somehow?

or is my perspective off again?

lol, option 2.

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At 6/27/08 11:37 PM, Vousielle wrote:
At 6/27/08 11:31 PM, kernalphage wrote: the toes look... deformed somehow?

or is my perspective off again?
lol, option 2.

But I do see what you mean.

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Posted at: 6/28/08 01:23 AM

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At 6/27/08 11:31 PM, kernalphage wrote: the toes look... deformed somehow?

or is my perspective off again?

yeah, I see what you mean. they're at a weird angle.

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yeah, I see what you mean. they're at a weird angle.

unless he's standing on his tiptoes. No doubt its coincidental, but thats what it looks like.

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strangely reminds me of ness from earthbound, probably because of the whole little ghost thing on the side. I liked it.


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At 6/27/08 10:55 PM, willobeen wrote: Here is the main character for my comic possibly-cartoon.
anything that you don't like about the character?

I like it, its perfect except the feet seem a bit too angled.
And what's with the pimp looking ghost thing next to him? :P

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At 6/28/08 02:12 AM, Koikii wrote:
At 6/27/08 10:55 PM, willobeen wrote: Here is the main character for my comic possibly-cartoon.
anything that you don't like about the character?
I like it, its perfect except the feet seem a bit too angled.
And what's with the pimp looking ghost thing next to him? :P

its an imaginary friend that he had when he was 6 but for whatever reason came back. It edges him to do stuff he normally wouldn't do because he is to afraid. (I like my premise...:P)

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At 6/28/08 05:42 AM, willobeen wrote:
At 6/28/08 02:12 AM, Koikii wrote:
At 6/27/08 10:55 PM, willobeen wrote: Here is the main character for my comic possibly-cartoon.
anything that you don't like about the character?
I like it, its perfect except the feet seem a bit too angled.
And what's with the pimp looking ghost thing next to him? :P
its an imaginary friend that he had when he was 6 but for whatever reason came back. It edges him to do stuff he normally wouldn't do because he is to afraid. (I like my premise...:P)

...Wow that's an awesome explanation. Is the kid gonna have any weapons or anything? He looks like an adventurer and he needs something like a sword or maybe a big stick. o_O

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Needs a nose in my opinion so his face doesnt look so flat, but dont make it stande out loads :P, good job and remember to repost any updates


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Posted at: 6/28/08 08:35 AM

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I like it, but the ghost just seems so, bland compared to the boy, maybe add color to the ghost or some depth?

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He just looks a little too plain. You don't really want a dull character for your comic, do ya?


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willobeen

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Posted at: 6/28/08 01:25 PM

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At 6/28/08 07:05 AM, Koikii wrote:
At 6/28/08 05:42 AM, willobeen wrote:
...Wow that's an awesome explanation. Is the kid gonna have any weapons or anything? He looks like an adventurer and he needs something like a sword or maybe a big stick. o_O

he just gets them as he finds them.

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Posted at: 6/28/08 04:00 PM

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Like ur style man.


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