At 6/27/08 04:08 AM, Fijeta wrote:
This is where I'm going to be putting my art from now on
I'll start with this enjoy
I don't get the sense of shape or depth in this, so much line yet it feels flat, the figures also seem to be a bit squashed in.
There are ways you can create space in the image just by subtle changes, though I must say you need to work on your shape and tone.
Try drawing figures as actual shapes and see how that works out, if imagination fails draw from life it is the best thing to do for an artist.
Even if it needs to be repeated a thousand times start with life drawing and work your way into 'anime' etc. it helps a tonne.