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At 8/2/09 09:01 PM, RazorHawk wrote:

As for my part, the exploding fighter came out pretty good, but I've had to change a lot of my plans. There's just not enough time to show everything I wanted to animate, but I'll still try to cover as much as I can.

Cover as much as you can and make whatever you can cover amazing. Either way I still can't wait to see it.

At 8/1/09 07:31 PM, ShortMonkey wrote:

I'll get on to that in a few days. I'm very busy at the moment.

You're always busy. I'm beginning to think you don't care about us.... :(
<cries>

P

Alright I'm finished part 34!, I wanted to extend the fightscene alittle more, but I only had a second left to work with so I cut that out instead. I hope you all like it as it is anyway!
check it out and tell me what you think
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/040809/7 4229_Disturbed_Collab_Part_34.php

At 8/4/09 09:39 PM, ColdReaver wrote:

thats awesome. Loved it great animation too :D

At 8/4/09 09:39 PM, ColdReaver wrote: Alright I'm finished part 34!, I wanted to extend the fightscene alittle more, but I only had a second left to work with so I cut that out instead. I hope you all like it as it is anyway!
check it out and tell me what you think
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/040809/7 4229_Disturbed_Collab_Part_34.php

The fight scene animation is kick ass. Great fbf action and great camera work! It's sweet to watch and makes both characters feel badass! It really is awesome!

The only thing that nags me for some reason is the last pose the elf character makes. It doesn't feel like an ending pose to me, but more like a middle of the fight resting pose. Maybe you could add something in the background, like a blurred out dead body, to show that it is the end. You could also make the character breathe heavily to show how tired he is. Or better yet, have him start in that pose and as the camera pans, have him move his arms to his sides to show the battle is indeed over, so there is no need to guard himself.

Again, that part just nags me for some reason. Everything else is sick though! It is an awesome part!!! 5/5 9.6/10

Hmmm, good idea. I'll change it right away

I agree with dirtshake, the conclusion to my part didn't look like it was quite finished, so here is the revised version, he looks alittle more battle-worn, and the corpses of his enemies can be seen
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/050809/7 2720_Disturbed_Collab_Part_34.php

At 8/5/09 09:15 PM, ColdReaver wrote: I agree with dirtshake, the conclusion to my part didn't look like it was quite finished, so here is the revised version, he looks alittle more battle-worn, and the corpses of his enemies can be seen
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/050809/7 2720_Disturbed_Collab_Part_34.php

Freaking epic, man, that stuff is pure gold. Two thumbs up.

Awesome work, ColdReaver!

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 - iceimp***
Part 3 - iceimp ***
Part 4 - YoinK***
Part 5 - YoinK & Feuse***
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross***
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 - iceimp***
Part 11 - RazorHawk***
Part 12 - Snicp***
Part 13 - PinkSkull***
Part 14 - Master-Samus-_-
Part 15 - YoinK***
Part 16 - Snicp***
Part 17 - ColdReaver***
Part 18 - dirtshake***
Part 19 - studionightbird
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 - RazorHawk
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - RazorHawk***
Part 28 - Master-Samus-_-
Part 29 - Feuse***/Master-Samus-_-
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake***
Part 32 - studio-nightbird***
Part 33 - PinkSkull***
Part 34 - ColdReaver***
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 - YoinK***
Part 37 - ColdReaver***
Part 38 - PinkSkull***
Part 39 - SupraAddict
Part 40 - Master-Samus-_-
Part 41 - PinkSkull***
Part 42 - ShortMonkey

I need everyone who participated to send me their comments if you have not already!

At 8/3/09 10:59 AM, dirtshake wrote: You're always busy. I'm beginning to think you don't care about us.... :(
<cries>

It's been like a year since I started this collab. Things have changed and I've gotten busier but there is no way I don't care about you all and this collab :P

At 8/5/09 11:51 PM, ShortMonkey wrote: It's been like a year since I started this collab. Things have changed and I've gotten busier but there is no way I don't care about you all and this collab :P

Excuses excuses.... but kind of crazy that this has been going on for a year. Another reason why I can't wait to see it finished. SO CLOSE to the finish too. :)

At 8/5/09 11:17 PM, RazorHawk wrote:

:: Freaking epic, man, that stuff is pure gold. Two thumbs up.

Thanks Razorhawk, I look forward to seeing your finished piece too!

This collab is what? 83% complete now? so close!

I should have my comments for the collab sometime soon.

In other news.. i've finished those two animations of mine and now i'm working on a couple flash games. :D
Here's a screenshot of the game i'm working on.

At 8/8/09 02:32 AM, YoinK wrote: This collab is what? 83% complete now? so close!

That's right!

I should have my comments for the collab sometime soon.

Awesome.

In other news.. i've finished those two animations of mine and now i'm working on a couple flash games. :D
Here's a screenshot of the game i'm working on.

Cool. I'm not too big on the gradients though...

At 8/8/09 02:32 AM, YoinK wrote: In other news.. i've finished those two animations of mine and now i'm working on a couple flash games. :D
Here's a screenshot of the game i'm working on.

I agree with ShortMonkey, the gradients should be a bit more subtle (as in don't fade them always to black). A light brown should fade more into a slightly darker brown, but not to pure black, unless you're working with a really dark gray.

In the meantime, guess I'll show an update.

Part 25 Update

I wanted to do so much more with this, but yeah, definitely wasn't a big enough time slot. The second half will have way more going on (still need to add everyone else involved with the battle), but the first half is pretty much done, save for a few minor details I might add in later.

Its getting there though, should be finished soon.

At 8/9/09 04:03 PM, RazorHawk wrote: Part 25 Update

That is looking fantastic. Great job!

At 8/9/09 04:03 PM, RazorHawk wrote: Part 25 Update

That looks awesome RazorHawk! nice work! :D

Awesome razorhawk D:

so, any info about how much is left or anything? we've been on the ALMOST done for months.. :P
im desperate, it is looking awesome D:

At 8/11/09 11:42 PM, PinkSkull wrote: Awesome razorhawk D:

so, any info about how much is left or anything? we've been on the ALMOST done for months.. :P
im desperate, it is looking awesome D:

There's 3 potential spots left, dunno if master-samus is going to finish them though

Hey, thanks guys. Hopefully I can get it done this weekend, but I still have a friend's wedding I need to go to.

At 8/11/09 11:42 PM, PinkSkull wrote: so, any info about how much is left or anything? we've been on the ALMOST done for months.. :P
im desperate, it is looking awesome D:

Chances are good Master-Samus's three parts are going to be opened up. It might take a little while longer for those three parts to get done by whoever takes them, but after that, I'm pretty sure we'd be home free by then, save for a few parts that will probably get done in the meantime.

I'd take another part if one were to open up.

At 8/13/09 01:01 AM, YoinK wrote: I'd take another part if one were to open up.

Yeah, I think it's about time we freed open some spots

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 - iceimp***
Part 3 - iceimp ***
Part 4 - YoinK***
Part 5 - YoinK & Feuse***
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross***
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 - iceimp***
Part 11 - RazorHawk***
Part 12 - Snicp***
Part 13 - PinkSkull***
Part 14 -
Part 15 - YoinK***
Part 16 - Snicp***
Part 17 - ColdReaver***
Part 18 - dirtshake***
Part 19 - studionightbird
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 - RazorHawk
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - RazorHawk***
Part 28 -
Part 29 - Feuse***
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake***
Part 32 - studio-nightbird***
Part 33 - PinkSkull***
Part 34 - ColdReaver***
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 - YoinK***
Part 37 - ColdReaver***
Part 38 - PinkSkull***
Part 39 - SupraAddict
Part 40 -
Part 41 - PinkSkull***
Part 42 - ShortMonkey

okay cool. I'm debating on whether I want part 28 or 40. I don't want part 14 because it would be right after my part 15.

Well, I figure I haven't put out an update since last time, so here's what I have so far. Keep in mind that I suck at body anatomy, so when you see this, you'll understand that it was my only option until I get better :P

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140809/4 4551_Prayerpart39.swf

/I just don't get it. It lags so much, even before the filters. At first I thought it was just loading, so I added a temporary preloader. It didn't resolve the problem, so I tried low quality as well, yet still the movie lags! I don't know what it is, maybe the enlarged screen on it. I'm *This* close to uploading it on the Newgrounds portal so I'm reassured that it'll work.
Any suggestions?

The pic below is a scrn shot when I exported it, and not on Spamtheweb.

At 8/14/09 12:29 PM, SupraAddict wrote: Well, I figure I haven't put out an update since last time, so here's what I have so far. Keep in mind that I suck at body anatomy, so when you see this, you'll understand that it was my only option until I get better :P

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140809/4 4551_Prayerpart39.swf

/I just don't get it. It lags so much, even before the filters. At first I thought it was just loading, so I added a temporary preloader. It didn't resolve the problem, so I tried low quality as well, yet still the movie lags! I don't know what it is, maybe the enlarged screen on it. I'm *This* close to uploading it on the Newgrounds portal so I'm reassured that it'll work.
Any suggestions?

The pic below is a scrn shot when I exported it, and not on Spamtheweb.

It might just be because of the detail I guess, don't worry too much about it, aslong as the song is sync'ed up with the animation it should run ok. SM will notice it if it slows down at all when it gets to your part

At 8/14/09 12:29 PM, SupraAddict wrote: /I just don't get it. It lags so much, even before the filters. At first I thought it was just loading, so I added a temporary preloader. It didn't resolve the problem, so I tried low quality as well, yet still the movie lags! I don't know what it is, maybe the enlarged screen on it. I'm *This* close to uploading it on the Newgrounds portal so I'm reassured that it'll work.
Any suggestions?

The pic below is a scrn shot when I exported it, and not on Spamtheweb.

Use the php link, not the swf one. If you use the swf one, you get the whole thing full screened, and it will almost always lag.

PHP link

On that link, it runs perfectly fine and smooth. My only suggestion is to maybe fix the "rain" effect, and make the raindrops a little more varied in location. Other than that, it looks great.

At 8/14/09 05:37 PM, RazorHawk wrote: On that link, it runs perfectly fine and smooth. My only suggestion is to maybe fix the "rain" effect, and make the raindrops a little more varied in location. Other than that, it looks great.

I agree with the rain effect. Other than that, Supra, the improvement is immense. I'm impressed. Great work. Just fix the rain effect and it will be awesome!

Disturbed is so fucking awesome! I'm having a wet dream just thinking about this collab.

Part 25

Think it needs anything else, or something changed? I feel like it does, but I'm not sure what exactly.

At 8/16/09 10:13 PM, RazorHawk wrote: Part 25

Think it needs anything else, or something changed? I feel like it does, but I'm not sure what exactly.

It looks great man, I'd say add a few more explosions, but other than that it excellent

At 8/16/09 10:13 PM, RazorHawk wrote: Part 25

Think it needs anything else, or something changed? I feel like it does, but I'm not sure what exactly.

I think it looks fine just like that! :D