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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 08:45 AM Reply

At 6/17/09 01:23 AM, ShortMonkey wrote:
At 6/17/09 12:46 AM, YoinK wrote: hmm.. well.. here's what I got so far for part 36.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/170609/2 618_prayer_yoink_part36.php
I love how the devil comes in the mirror. The thing is, the devil should not be transparent and the guy in the mirror should disappear.

oh no.. the demon is a different person.. and he pulls the demon out of the mirror and kills it with a knife.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 08:48 AM Reply

I like Yoink's part so far. Can't wait to see the final product.
And Coldreaver's artwork just looks badass so far!

I really can't wait until this is finished and see everyone's part in action. It will be sweet!!!


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 11:41 AM Reply

At 6/17/09 02:25 AM, ColdReaver wrote: great job yoink! I don't have much in the way of animation done( I do, but I want to work on alittle more before I show anything). Instead here's a screenshot.
This part is going to be more Battle-heavy, more so than all my other parts!

dude, your so fucking awesome..

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 01:04 PM Reply

At 6/17/09 07:48 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: You know what I just realised. We're not doing bios, we're doing comments. I will have to change "Bios" in the menu to "Says". The shorter the word, the better it will look on the main menu.

...Aren't they both they same length of the word?
Maybe we should state like how we all came to love disturbed, and why we thought our part would bring out our true perception of it in our own way.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 06:11 PM Reply

ColdReaver's work is godly, without a doubt.

I like that elf character, he's awesome.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 07:32 PM Reply

At 6/17/09 08:45 AM, YoinK wrote: oh no.. the demon is a different person.. and he pulls the demon out of the mirror and kills it with a knife.

Well that's different then. Should be awesome!

At 6/17/09 01:04 PM, SupraAddict wrote: ...Aren't they both they same length of the word?
Maybe we should state like how we all came to love disturbed, and why we thought our part would bring out our true perception of it in our own way.

Comments sounds better than says. I'm just clearing it up that we need a shorter word than comments so people don't say, "comments sounds better than says.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 07:38 PM Reply

At 6/17/09 01:04 PM, SupraAddict wrote: Maybe we should state like how we all came to love disturbed, and why we thought our part would bring out our true perception of it in our own way.

Your comments can be whatever you want as long as it is related to the collab.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 17th, 2009 @ 10:05 PM Reply

At 6/17/09 06:11 PM, RazorHawk wrote: ColdReaver's work is godly, without a doubt.

I like that elf character, he's awesome.

Thanks man =)


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 12:17 AM Reply

PINKSKULL'S SUPER-AWESOME COMMENT:

" Hi there, I joined the collab cause I didn't had any project and wanted to animate on that time, but I went on and off work repeadly 'cuz my flash mood varied along with real life. For this collab I wanted to focus mainly on the animation, that's why my animation looks somewhat nice while the art somewhat doesn't. I'll focus more on the art next time if you want it.. Oh, and remember, a nice comment on my parts is a nice reward when I conquer the world, i DO read them all ;D "

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 01:50 AM Reply

At 6/19/09 12:17 AM, PinkSkull wrote: PINKSKULL'S SUPER-AWESOME COMMENT:

1. PM me
2. That's 95 words - way over the 40 word limit.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 02:09 AM Reply

1. PM me

oh lol, ok

2. That's 95 words - way over the 40 word limit.

didn't read about that.. srry )=

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 12:11 PM Reply

I have a question. I've had this on my mind a while and I think now is an appropriate time to ask. How will co-author's be decided? Or are you keeping that secret until the movie comes out? heh heh...

Just wondering. I can't wait until this is out!!! WOOO


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 02:37 PM Reply

At 6/19/09 12:11 PM, dirtshake wrote: I have a question. I've had this on my mind a while and I think now is an appropriate time to ask. How will co-author's be decided? Or are you keeping that secret until the movie comes out? heh heh...

Just wondering. I can't wait until this is out!!! WOOO

I always assumed it was the number of parts, probably why I decided to do another one lol. That empty spot was calling out to me


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 03:50 PM Reply

At 6/19/09 02:37 PM, ColdReaver wrote: I always assumed it was the number of parts, probably why I decided to do another one lol. That empty spot was calling out to me

I don't really wanna be Co-Author so count me out.

Also my message:
"Heyy Doodz I joined this awesome collar because I didn't think people would draw me with a uni brow! ohhhh wait.... oh and because Disturb Kikz ASS!"


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 04:09 PM Reply

At 6/19/09 03:50 PM, iceimp wrote: Also my message:
"Heyy Doodz I joined this awesome collar because I didn't think people would draw me with a uni brow! ohhhh wait.... oh and because Disturb Kikz ASS!"

Wow...I'm not sure how to respond to that. So I'm just going to go back to work and forget I ever saw it.

lol

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 19th, 2009 @ 04:22 PM Reply

At 6/19/09 04:09 PM, dirtshake wrote: Wow...I'm not sure how to respond to that. So I'm just going to go back to work and forget I ever saw it.

lol

Dont forget I spelt Collab wrong!


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 20th, 2009 @ 09:33 PM Reply

I don't want to rush my part.. but I am making progress.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 20th, 2009 @ 11:24 PM Reply

Okay, I've redone my part 3 times, which doesn't sound like a lot, but when you tweak the skin, you have to do it for almost every single frame of 138 frames. Alright, I've already gotten some great input from Shortmonkey on this, but I would also like all of yours just to reach somewhat of a culmination so I do not have to redo it a third time. If you think there should be a part in which I should improve on, Screen shots of your examples would be appreciated.

Thanks.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/200609/8 4088_prayerpart.swf


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 20th, 2009 @ 11:56 PM Reply

At 6/20/09 11:24 PM, SupraAddict wrote:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/200609/8 4088_prayerpart.swf

I love it :D well done

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 21st, 2009 @ 09:35 AM Reply

At 6/20/09 11:24 PM, SupraAddict wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/200609/8 4088_prayerpart.swf

Dude, its awesome, I wouldn't change a thing. Nice effects you've got there.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 21st, 2009 @ 11:34 AM Reply

At 6/20/09 11:24 PM, SupraAddict wrote: Okay, I've redone my part 3 times, which doesn't sound like a lot, but when you tweak the skin, you have to do it for almost every single frame of 138 frames. Alright, I've already gotten some great input from Shortmonkey on this, but I would also like all of yours just to reach somewhat of a culmination so I do not have to redo it a third time. If you think there should be a part in which I should improve on, Screen shots of your examples would be appreciated.

Thanks.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/200609/8 4088_prayerpart.swf

maybe make sure that the animation frame lengths match up with the audio frame length.. other than that it's perfect for that part of the song. :D

Here's my progress...
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/210609/4 1535_prayer_yoink_part36.php
after i'm done with some details... i'm still debating upon whether he should just throw the demon out of the mirror or pull him out and knife him in the head.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 21st, 2009 @ 02:34 PM Reply

At 6/21/09 11:34 AM, YoinK wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/210609/4 1535_prayer_yoink_part36.php
after i'm done with some details... i'm still debating upon whether he should just throw the demon out of the mirror or pull him out and knife him in the head.

You could have him tear off and pull out the severed head of the demon. The guy definitely looks like he has the muscle to do it.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 21st, 2009 @ 07:53 PM Reply

At 6/20/09 11:24 PM, SupraAddict wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/200609/8 4088_prayerpart.swf

I love the artwork and the effects. The overall spooky feel to it is awesome and I would change a thing about that. What you have now is a nice spooky tone which works amazingly with the song. The only gripe I have with it, and it is small, is the animation of him raising his head. Right now it looks like the hood raises to reveal his face. If you were going to go back and tweak it I would make it look more like he is raising his head.

However, what you have right now is awesome! Great work!!!

At 6/21/09 11:34 AM, YoinK wrote: Here's my progress...
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/210609/4 1535_prayer_yoink_part36.php
after i'm done with some details... i'm still debating upon whether he should just throw the demon out of the mirror or pull him out and knife him in the head.

I wouldn't have him simply pull him out of the mirror and throw him but the knife-in-head idea also doesn't sound good for me for some reason.

Maybe throw him into something sharp, like an oddly sharpened coat-rack or something. Or throw him out the window and have him land on a fence. That would be pretty brutal but also awesome! The could just draw him on the fence post and use some tweens for some fancy camera work. You could make a breeze flow on him as well for an added creepy look.
And don't forget the glass breaking when he throws his hand in there.
Otherwise your part is coming along awesome!

Man I can't wait until this is done!!! It is going to be amazing to see all these great pieces together in one movie!!! =D


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 21st, 2009 @ 08:32 PM Reply

At 6/20/09 11:24 PM, SupraAddict wrote: Okay, I've redone my part 3 times, which doesn't sound like a lot, but when you tweak the skin, you have to do it for almost every single frame of 138 frames. Alright, I've already gotten some great input from Shortmonkey on this, but I would also like all of yours just to reach somewhat of a culmination so I do not have to redo it a third time. If you think there should be a part in which I should improve on, Screen shots of your examples would be appreciated.

Thanks.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/200609/8 4088_prayerpart.swf

It's looking great man, really loving the effects and the fire animation in his hand is very well done.
Kickass work!


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 22nd, 2009 @ 02:00 AM Reply

Good work, YoinK and Supra! When you two are happy with your parts, please send me the .flas. Thank you.


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 22nd, 2009 @ 08:42 AM Reply

awesome so how many more parts are we waiting on?

Perhaps a list refreshment if its okay ;)

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 22nd, 2009 @ 10:50 AM Reply

cool so just write

PIE


IM HERE RELAX.

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 22nd, 2009 @ 02:22 PM Reply

At 6/22/09 08:42 AM, studio-nightbird wrote: awesome so how many more parts are we waiting on?

I believe 10 more parts

Perhaps a list refreshment if its okay ;)

something like this I believe.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220609/5 1628_screenshot_01.gif

Part 36 progress...
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220609/5 1680_prayer_yoink_part36.php


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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 23rd, 2009 @ 05:35 AM Reply

At 6/22/09 02:22 PM, YoinK wrote:
At 6/22/09 08:42 AM, studio-nightbird wrote: awesome so how many more parts are we waiting on?
I believe 10 more parts

Perhaps a list refreshment if its okay ;)
something like this I believe.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220609/5 1628_screenshot_01.gif

thanks xD


Part 36 progress...
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220609/5 1680_prayer_yoink_part36.php

Not bad keep it up I'm liking it xD (OWWW MANGAFOX...interesting ad I'm gonna check it out :P)

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Response to "Prayer" by Disturbed - Collab! Jun. 23rd, 2009 @ 10:59 AM Reply

At 6/23/09 05:35 AM, studio-nightbird wrote:
At 6/22/09 02:22 PM, YoinK wrote:
At 6/22/09 08:42 AM, studio-nightbird wrote: awesome so how many more parts are we waiting on?
I believe 10 more parts

Perhaps a list refreshment if its okay ;)
something like this I believe.
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220609/5 1628_screenshot_01.gif
thanks xD

Part 36 progress...
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220609/5 1680_prayer_yoink_part36.php
Not bad keep it up I'm liking it xD (OWWW MANGAFOX...interesting ad I'm gonna check it out :P)

One flew over the cuckoo's nest.

Part 36 is shaping up well, great work with it YoinK!
Dirtshake, thank you for your comment, I'll get on it right away.


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