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At 6/10/09 07:15 PM, ShortMonkey wrote:
At 6/10/09 11:50 AM, YoinK wrote: I think it would look better if the mouth opened up more for the "pray" part, and maybe have the eyes close to really show some feeling to it.
Like this?

I like how the mouth opens up more and the eyes are closed.. maybe have the mouth stay opened longer and don't have the mouth close completely.

Also, here's my part. Any suggestions?

hmm.. maybe show teeth at the end instead of a closed mouth. And for the "S" part of inside show just teeth too.

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I am a huge fan of disturbed, and I would love to be a part of this collaboration. I'm a little surprised at the choice, prayer, but I will give it my best go and take on part 39.

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At 6/11/09 07:54 AM, YoinK wrote: I like how the mouth opens up more and the eyes are closed.. maybe have the mouth stay opened longer and don't have the mouth close completely.

Alrighty.

Also, here's my part. Any suggestions?
hmm.. maybe show teeth at the end instead of a closed mouth. And for the "S" part of inside show just teeth too.

Alright. Did you see the updated version (last post on last page)? I added some more detail in the artwork.

At 6/11/09 02:21 PM, SupraAddict wrote: I am a huge fan of disturbed, and I would love to be a part of this collaboration. I'm a little surprised at the choice, prayer, but I will give it my best go and take on part 39.

Part 39 is already taken. However, if you would like to compete with RazorHawk for the part, go ahead. But it would be smarter to take a part that is free. Here's the list:

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 - iceimp***
Part 3 - iceimp ***
Part 4 - YoinK***
Part 5 - YoinK & Feuse***
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross***
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 - iceimp***
Part 11 - RazorHawk***
Part 12 - Snicp***
Part 13 - PinkSkull***
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - YoinK***
Part 16 - Snicp***
Part 17 - ColdReaver***
Part 18 - dirtshake***
Part 19 -
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 -
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - RazorHawk***
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse***/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake
Part 32 - studio-nightbird
Part 33 - PinkSkull***
Part 34 -
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 - YoinK
Part 37 - ColdReaver***
Part 38 - PinkSkull***
Part 39 - RazorHawk
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull***
Part 42 - ShortMonkey


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Lmao my part isnt even mine no more o.o

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Nah, I already started on part 39, I might as well go for the battle :)
here's a scrn pic outline/onionskin of my fiya

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At 6/11/09 06:29 PM, iceimp wrote: Lmao my part isnt even mine no more o.o

What are you talking about? If I removed your name from a part, that would have been ages ago. You can obviously reclaim your part or take a new part.

At 6/11/09 06:35 PM, SupraAddict wrote: Nah, I already started on part 39, I might as well go for the battle :)
here's a scrn pic outline/onionskin of my fiya

Alright. Go ahead.


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At 6/11/09 07:37 PM, ShortMonkey wrote:
At 6/11/09 06:29 PM, iceimp wrote: Lmao my part isnt even mine no more o.o
What are you talking about? If I removed your name from a part, that would have been ages ago. You can obviously reclaim your part or take a new part.

nooo u gave me a unibrow lol

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Finally I have the time to work on my part. I've been busy helping out with 'Project 33' (live action film).
But now I have a few days off from that.

I started working on my part a few hours ago and I haven't got any swf files to show you, but more of a screen shot. Still got a bit of work But I should be done in a few hours so yea ;)

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At 6/11/09 07:37 PM, ShortMonkey wrote: Alright. Go ahead.

SupraAddict can just take Part 39, I'd rather not compete with people and just get parts done sooner. If he's already gotten started and it wants it, eh, just let him have it.

So I'll move myself to Part 25. But guys, please don't try to take this one too. Let's focus on the empty ones before competing for parts.

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At 6/11/09 11:24 PM, RazorHawk wrote:
At 6/11/09 07:37 PM, ShortMonkey wrote: Alright. Go ahead.
SupraAddict can just take Part 39, I'd rather not compete with people and just get parts done sooner. If he's already gotten started and it wants it, eh, just let him have it.

So I'll move myself to Part 25. But guys, please don't try to take this one too. Let's focus on the empty ones before competing for parts.

Sorry man, I thought part 39 was empty from the last update. I wasn't trying to compete with ya :)

Here's what I have done so far. I'm planning on animating the figure on the 10000 fists/indestructible album to grasp the flame in its hand (camera zooms out) and then it purges the fire as my part ends.
Hand of fire preview
Any tips?

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all done. This was easier than I thought. So easy I feel like taking another part xD. If there is any parts free I'll take it.

The Girl is the same design as the girl from my flash 'Never on your own' just with the wings on her head and the rainbow coloured eyes. Tell me what you think and what could be improved on.

Anyway Sure your dieing to see what I've busted up so here you go.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/120609/5 0540_Prayer_collab_Part_32_studionightbi rd.php

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Lookin' good, Supra.

Studio-nightbird, that is fantastic! Send the .fla in Flash 8 format to sprint-air@hotmail.com

And you can take another part. Part 19 and 34 are free.


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At 6/12/09 02:11 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: Lookin' good, Supra.

Studio-nightbird, that is fantastic! Send the .fla in Flash 8 format to sprint-air@hotmail.com

And you can take another part. Part 19 and 34 are free.

I'll take part 19 if its okay ;) I'll work on it tonight and show you tomorrow (Australian time)

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At 6/12/09 04:33 AM, studio-nightbird wrote: I'll take part 19 if its okay ;) I'll work on it tonight and show you tomorrow (Australian time)

Works for me being the Victorian I am.

Well, guys, we are very close! Bios page is almost done and I will be taking biographies very soon.


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At 6/12/09 12:07 AM, studio-nightbird wrote: all done. This was easier than I thought. So easy I feel like taking another part xD. If there is any parts free I'll take it.

The Girl is the same design as the girl from my flash 'Never on your own' just with the wings on her head and the rainbow coloured eyes. Tell me what you think and what could be improved on.

Anyway Sure your dieing to see what I've busted up so here you go.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/120609/5 0540_Prayer_collab_Part_32_studionightbi rd.php

Not bad, I like what you did with the filters there. The one thing that I couldn't help but notice was the eye scene. The hot pink/ purple didn't go well with the rest of the eye. If you tone it down, or change it to a different color, it would look great.

Regarding my submission, all I can say is that I wish I had the filter option on my 2002 Macromedia flash animator X-(

I went back and touched up the fingers. I still have to fill em' in with color, and, heheh, add skin.
Hey, does anyone have any suggestion on how to improve my fire, color or otherwise?
Hand update(Pic)
Fire

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At 6/12/09 04:57 AM, ShortMonkey wrote:
At 6/12/09 04:33 AM, studio-nightbird wrote: I'll take part 19 if its okay ;) I'll work on it tonight and show you tomorrow (Australian time)
Works for me being the Victorian I am.

Well, guys, we are very close! Bios page is almost done and I will be taking biographies very soon.

Awesome job studio-nightbird! As for bios, what do we need to write up? anything, or do we need to be specific like flash works and stuff

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Nvm, I guess I'll just copy Feuse's format lol XD
You know what? I think I'll take another part! I don't have much projects to work on, besides my main one, so I think I can squeeze in enough time for another part.

If no one is taking part 34 I'll gladly claim it

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Say hello to full house!

*** = Done and sent

-_- = on the verge of being removed (if you are that person, please reply in this thread so I know you're still alive)

If there are two names, it means they are competing for the part. Also, this is cutthroat. If you want a part that is already taken, you may compete for the part. May the best animator win.

Part 1 - PinkSkull***
Part 2 - iceimp***
Part 3 - iceimp ***
Part 4 - YoinK***
Part 5 - YoinK & Feuse***
Part 6 - Master-Samus***
Part 7 - OnyxcCross***
Part 8 - Feuse***
Part 9 - Feuse***
Part 10 - iceimp***
Part 11 - RazorHawk***
Part 12 - Snicp***
Part 13 - PinkSkull***
Part 14 - Master-Samus
Part 15 - YoinK***
Part 16 - Snicp***
Part 17 - ColdReaver***
Part 18 - dirtshake***
Part 19 - studionightbird
Part 20 - dirtshake***
Part 21 - ColdReaver***
Part 22 - YoinK***
Part 23 - Penboy***
Part 24 - ShortMonkey
Part 25 - RazorHawk
Part 26 - NoperDoperTrooper***
Part 27 - RazorHawk***
Part 28 - Master-Samus
Part 29 - Feuse***/Master-Samus
Part 30 - Feuse***
Part 31 - dirtshake
Part 32 - studio-nightbird***
Part 33 - PinkSkull***
Part 34 - ColdReaver
Part 35 - Kibbl3s***
Part 36 - YoinK
Part 37 - ColdReaver***
Part 38 - PinkSkull***
Part 39 - SupraAddict
Part 40 - Master-Samus
Part 41 - PinkSkull***
Part 42 - ShortMonkey

Also, Supra, I like your sig... what could be better though is a thinner border and "Prayer Collab" should not be transparent but staring in your face. I like how the hand is shaping up. Keep it up.


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This collab is definitely going to be epic!
Anyway, i've been working on part 36. It's getting there. Here's a screenshot.

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At 6/13/09 12:22 AM, YoinK wrote: This collab is definitely going to be epic!

You can most definitely say that again.

Anyway, i've been working on part 36. It's getting there. Here's a screenshot.

It's David Draiman!

I have PM'd Master-Samus and dirtshake with our situation of nearing completion so we should see some more from them soon.


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Try out the bios! Or even the scenes... hell, click Play if you must!


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At 6/13/09 04:43 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: Try out the bios! Or even the scenes... hell, click Play if you must!

Looking good.


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At 6/11/09 10:09 PM, studio-nightbird wrote: Finally I have the time to work on my part.

I just scrolled past and saw that; it looks fantastic.


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and I've finished. Hope you'll enjoy it ;)

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140806/8 2368_Part_19_studionightbird.php

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At 6/13/09 08:56 AM, studio-nightbird wrote: and I've finished. Hope you'll enjoy it ;)

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140806/8 2368_Part_19_studionightbird.php

Bloody hell - you're quick. Great work.

Send me the .fla please. And thank you for participating in the collab!


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Bloody hell - you're quick. Great work.

Send me the .fla please. And thank you for participating in the collab!

Thanks :3

File sent. This collab has inspired me to create a random flash fight using those 2 characters. Not sure really.

anything else that needs to be done?

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At 6/13/09 10:02 AM, studio-nightbird wrote:
Bloody hell - you're quick. Great work.

Send me the .fla please. And thank you for participating in the collab!
Thanks :3

No worries.

File sent. This collab has inspired me to create a random flash fight using those 2 characters. Not sure really.

Good luck on that.

anything else that needs to be done?

Not really. Just stick around a bit - I'm taking bios soon.


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At 6/13/09 04:43 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: Try out the bios! Or even the scenes... hell, click Play if you must!

That looks amazing SM!!!!! After PinkSkull's part I definitely wanted to see more.
We're officially 76% done with the animating part of this collab. We just need to finish 10 more parts. :D

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At 6/13/09 04:43 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: Try out the bios! Or even the scenes... hell, click Play if you must!

Oh my god, its epic already. Great music choices for the main menu and the bios. Everything just looks incredibly awesome.

Definitely an honor to be a part of this.

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At 6/13/09 04:43 AM, ShortMonkey wrote: Try out the bios! Or even the scenes... hell, click Play if you must!

ShortMonkey, great work with creating the menu and bios! I love the intro and the choices of music, it has me pumped to break some shit >:D The only suggestions I have to improve it, would be to add a transition when it switches artists instead of the abrupt scene switching. Also, is there a way to compress the files? If you have Audacity, then, as much as it pains me to say, you can cut out most of the "Inside The Fire" track so it only plays what is needed. Other than that, I agree with RazorHawk; I'm excited to be a part of this collaboration!

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